Josie24

This portrays the pining aspect of break-ups very well, I applaud you. The first thing I notice is that some of your sentences aren't capitalized. "I almost couldn't remember why ...

Oof. The different perspectives made me laugh. What is going on in the guy's life that made him the way he is? Why is he taunting the cat? Why is ...

Thank you. All of my writing is a little rushed; I can't seem to make any of it longer without being boring or adding details I'm saving for later. Any ...

The story and names are meant to be cliche. I'm a sucker for cliche things just because I find them hilarious. As for the plot, it came to me in ...

Thank you for pointing out the hardcover mistake. The girls were bugging her by pelting her with books, if it wasn't clear. Thanks for reviewing; the suggestions were much appreciated!

Thank you for reviewing! No offense, but I don't have any idea where to start with answering questions if you haven't read any of the other parts. This story doesn't ...

Thanks for pointing this out. I forgot to add some information, I guess it just got caught in my head. There was only one maid gossiping because the other there ...

Thank you. It is much appreciated to see that this one did better than the first one. I try to fix my mistakes in my writing permanently, so it is ...

Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad the story is being reciprocated so well. To be honest, though I had high hopes, I thought that only my sister would read this story. ...

Thank you. I like all reviews, especially ones that help me with my writing, but ones like this help me (and my laziness) to continue to pursue story ideas. I ...

I just saw your review. Thank you for the compliments! I was looking for the quote, and thought it looked the same. Took me ten minutes of rereading to see ...

I usually write this story late at night, or early in the morning, just because the story came from a dream, so most of it is just what exhausted me ...

Hello, I just read your review. The answer to your question is yes (well, slightly). Tabby is having an out-of-body experience, but because this life, here, isn't really her own ...

Wow, that was fast! Good luck, I'll be looking for it! Okay, that sounded really creepy, I'm sorry.

Oh my, I didn't realize I wrote so much! Now I'm slightly embarrassed.