JosephGeorge

Thanks for the review of the review (lol, so awesome!)

Oh, and Merry Christmas!

Thanks for that review Kaos! I completely understand where you're coming from. I realize that everything I've uploaded so far is exactly like you say, which doesn't show for much. ...

Thanks for those comments Aleta, much appreciated. For the first line I wanted to make it obvious that this was a sort of quote-on-quote rap, so I threw in some ...

Thanks for the review dystopianmonkey01! Good to hear from you. I do agree about the first few lines. It seems a bit choppy here and there. I'll probably go through ...

Sure thing Hikaru! If there's anything that you'd like me to help with, just PM me and I'll get back to you as soon as I can.

And I completely missed the fact that it is supposed to be a Haiku, so that complicates things, but makes it better because it's restricting you to some specific format, ...

Well, this was just a random little thing that I chucked together in about thirty seconds, literally, so I agree with most of it. The whole point was to write ...

Lol, agreed. This was the one that I wrote in like thirty seconds on your Way Pad. It's just stupid fun.

Actually, "Return to Sender" means that it was an undeliverable letter, meaning he was reading his own love letter to himself.

Thanks for the comments HollywoodUndead. It was good to see that someone enjoyed it.

Two out of five. Lol, I apologize if the review seemed harsh at all, that's not really what I wanted to come across. It's my least favorite part of reviewing. ...

and we could see the yellowed leaves fly the gray sky backdropping black bent swaying trees showing us the wind as we sat in the creaking house It's just that ...

No problem. Just another note, make sure you take everything I saw with a grain of salt. I'm a really opinionated person, so everything I saw is what I think ...

Hey Samk642! I read through the few revisions that you made, and they look good. It's actually really surprising how something as simple as italicizing the correct text in the ...