JosephGeorge

The shapes are chess pieces, 3 pawns and a "Queen" of hearts, as Kbug1997 saw and mentioned in her comment below. Sorry if that was confusing. One is blue because ...

The shapes are chess pieces, 3 pawns and a "Queen" of hearts, as Kbug1997 saw and mentioned in her comment below. Sorry if that was confusing. One is blue because ...

Thanks for the review Rosendorn. It sure helped. My problem is that it all makes sense to me, so I don't need nor crave the bits of information in between, ...

Ah, that's cool to see that now. I love that you put so much into this simple poem!

Yah, you don't meet too many writers these days that know what it's like to work on a farm or ranch. Kind of a dying breed.

And I have a PM draft that has the code for my review's base, so I don't have to type everything over and over and over :D

I just uploaded an image that's the right dimension to Google and then BBCoded them in.

Okay, that makes a little more sense. I feel like you should put that as a disclaimer at the top of this piece, that way anyone else who reads it ...

Thanks for that review, @dystopianmonkey01 ! Great to hear some feedback. I completely agree with the one word starting the stanzas. I hadn't recognized that before, but it's poetry, and ...

Is this supposed to be a review?

No problem. It will jump up quite a few points if you do revise it a little. Let me know if there's anything else I can help with :D

Thanks for the review Kbug1997! Good to hear from you. In regards to your comment on the formatting, I realize that it's true some might have trouble reading it because ...

Yah. I wanted it to look like a gallows, but with a tree trunk for the main beam going up.

Thanks for that review Hikarufire64! Good to hear from you. It would be nice to have something in there about who's the subject, but at the same time I want ...

Okay, sounds like you've got a plan then. I've got faith that you'll edit this into something good. If you ever want me to look at it again, just PM ...