JosephGeorge

Hey SnazzyPencil, First Impressions: Short, and sweet. It's okay, but to be honest I wasn't too impressed. I suppose it's because this sort of thing has been done before, and ...

Hey RadiantShadow, First Impressions: I thought that this was a very original piece that reflects a solid rhyming scheme, but doesn't get restricted by the need to make syllables click ...

Hey Hikarufire64, Being that this is a "prologue," I won't focus any on writing style or nature, but just on the concepts behind your book and the ideas presented in ...

Hey Mialynire, First Impressions: What a sad little thing I just read. I sure hope my life doesn't end up this way. Positives: If you were going for something that ...

Hey Remembrance, First Impressions: Well, there's not much to receive an impression from here, volume wise. Some of the best poems are really, really short, so that's not necessarily a ...

Hey Dididub, here for a Review Day review! As I have read any of the previous chapters, I'll focus more on the aesthetics of this piece. Impressions: Nice fantasy you've ...

Hey AmyMedek, here for a Review Day review! As this is a list of ideas I'll base this review off of the capability of these items to work in a ...

Hey Killyouwithwords, here for a Review Day review! So first thing: Ahh! Is so stinking long it took .e like twenty minutes to read it through and look it over. ...

Hey Zolen, here for a Review Day review! Dropping in here at the middle of your book, so I'll just focus on some aesthetic things. Impressions: I thought that this ...

Hey TheSilverFox, here for a Review Day review! Impressions: True poetry. I quite like this piece and feel that it should have been reviewed out of the Green Room a ...

Hey Lau2001, here for a Review Day review! Impressions: Well, this certainly is an interesting little story. You have this great build up of helping us to think about this ...

Hey Mea, here for a Review Day review! As I haven't read any of the previous chapters, I'll just focus mostly on the aesthetics. Impressions: Love the high fantasy. I'm ...

Hey Jpwriter, here for a Review Day review! I'm going to base this review entirely off of the more aesthetic part of your writing, because I'm dropping in here at ...

Hey tigeraye, here for a Review Day review! Impressions: (First thing, I would make sure and tag this as having strong language, that way it's labeled correctly.) Miles upon miles ...

Hey Poseidon, here for a Review Day review! As this is a chapter in a book, and I haven't read the rest of it, I'll just evaluate purely off of ...