JosephGeorge

Hey Rin, here for a Review Day review, First Impressions: Positives: Abaddon nodded, "Surely it isn't much. It's only another person you're hungrily eager for. It's no victory when I ...

Hey Wolfie, here for a Review Day review, Positives: Check the back of the book, honey Your angels are all wrong Just tune the pegs to this and that And ...

Hey, Positives: Your choice to use the exact same formatting for literally every line was a bit risky. If you repeat yourself more than twice it's usually a bad thing, ...

Hey Matt, here for a Review Day review, Positives: The formatting of this poem is choppy, which works well with the "chops" of the waves that are being drawn for ...

Hey Aleta, here for a Review Day review, Positives: This is such a unique and power packed piece. I'm pleasantly surprised at how much you were able to deliver. Reluctance ...

Hey Zizi16, here for a Review Day review, Positives: A strong voice and a definite direction for this poem. You know where you wanted to go with it for sure. ...

Hey amelie, here for a Review Day review, Positives: I thought this was great as you've spoken of a sort of low part in life, but the entire poem is ...

Hey JaredGines, here for a Review Day review, Positives: It's simple, and you get your point across very easily. I understand completely the dilemma that this person is facing, and ...

Hey Birkhoff, here for a Review Day review, Positives: some splinters, some splinters i pull free, and though i feel the wound, it heals. some splinters, some splinters i cannot ...

Hey, Positives: I started reading with the goal in mind that you would actually show me "what it means to e a cowboy." Kind of like an essay, with a ...

Hey, Positives: Great formatting and style. I can really picture this being turned into anything from country to pop, and working quite well. fireflies will take refuge over our bed, ...

Hey SilloriaD, here for a Review Day review, Positives: I really enjoyed the flow of your poem, all building up to the end which is classic and fresh. You've also ...

Hey anirban, here for a Review Day review, Positives: but because I no longer loved myself by loving you. It's very easily attainable as to where you were taking this ...

Hey SirLight, here for a Review Day review, Positives: Beautiful imagery and a wonderful whimsical, but heavy tone that you've got playing here. I quite love it when someone takes ...

Hey Aleta, here for a Review Day review, Positives: I love the dark emotion that emanates from this poem. Even the individualized words you've chosen seem to build up this ...