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Re: Unlocked Puzzle
Hello Laminated. Jonathan here with a review for you and your poem. Okay well I can’t help but notice that you are lacking in punctuation, I would say put some ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Sleepless Thoughts
Well I am here with a review for you mister Beyond. Well I have to say this was really good except for you said "them" who are them, they? I ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: a noontime folly
Hello Ancient, Jonathan here with a review for you and you poem. Okay first I would advise you to put some commas in and more capitalization. Well I am wondering ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: When The Heart Sings Alone
Here I am again for a review for your poem Leo. You know I quite like that name. :) Okay I have to say just like the last time and ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: The Engineer and the Enquirer.
Hello Semi. well here I am for a review. Well I feel like this is not even a poem more like just a bunch of questions that don't have much ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: venice
Hello Persy, Jonathan here with a like to your poem. Okay well I have a few questions for ya. First: is do you have a plot in this poem and ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution Season 2: Episode 7, End Of Shader Part 1 of 3
Hello dark. Here I am for some more reviews. Here are spelling errors. She got to her feet and stood there for a minute trying to remeber what had just ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Highway
Hello Sydneys, Jonathan here with a review for you and your epic poem. Okay In the secound line you state "Where ever it takes me," then you say in the ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Sonnet 2 ( Service Of Love )
Hello Again. Jonathan here with another review for you and your poem. I hope it helps. Again I think you should try to cut down on the old English even ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: My Heart Flies Away
Hello Leo. Jonathan here with a review for you and your lovely poem. I hope it helps. I can't help but notice that you are a little low on punctuation ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: redwoods
Hello Eyeofthestorm. Jonathan here with a review for you and your lovely poem about red woods, a topic which I have always loved. Well you only said redwoods once, anyway ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Dreaming of You
Hello Anna, It has been quite a long time sense I wrote my last review so if this is not really good or helpful please forgive me. But I will ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evoultion Season 2, Episode 6, Shader's Bait
Hello dark. Jonathan here with another review for your amazing story. I hope it helps. I think you may have to much punctuation in this chapter sometimes that is a ...
Aug 3, 2013 -
Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution Season 2: Episode 5, Mansion Spidar
Hello dark. I absolutely love the way you started this it makes it sound like a very positive chapter is under way. As I walked father and father away from ...
Aug 3, 2013 -
Re: Gregarious
Hello Olivia, Jonathan here to write a review, I am truly sorry if this does not help, my excuse is that I have not written a review for about a ...
Aug 3, 2013