Jojo

I want to know whether the buffalo has budged? Maybe you didn't even try to be good, but tell you what, it still is. Blocks come to me as well ...

You've not said the most important thing, do you have MONEY? If you have that, then it's enough to make everyone forget all your normalities. In ten minutes, that should ...

I did not mean to say it was bad. I think it has plenty of scope to be a good one but some editing and re-writing has to be done. ...

Flowing story, right. But it is too action-packed for too long.

Sorry, guys, for mispelling Sil...what was that again? That is another aspect of Tolkien. The names are so rythmical and also enchanting. Do you think we could start another LOTR ...

The new version looks much more complete. With Matt's suggestion, are you making a newer version?

It pretty much fits in with the poem that you had to memorise, both of them were nothing remarkable.

'Indigo children' sounds like a rare loss of touch of genius from a classic poet. The poem is a bit complicated, but once all the figures and thoughts sink in, ...

Serves her right for disfiguring such a great song into such a great parody. It is unacceptably comical.

Sure, it's short of emotion. But how much emotion does one expect of someone who knows he is going to his death? Great imager, I'd say.

Yeah, I think it is a few catchy phrases short of being a good one.

Are you a great listener of Eminem, because I was reading it aloud and it sounded so much like him. I think the lyrics were a mixture of many things ...

By me, tis' truly wonderful. The feeling between the two have been beautifully put. The inconsequence of their feelings have been ultra-beautifully put.

The last line does sound like a bit of an anti-climax............... or does it?

You know what, it suddenly seems to make a lot of sense. Kinda' funny, but all of a sudden, Clockwork sounds like one of the best I have come across. ...