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Re: How to Escape from a Bad Party (Humor)
Yay, I'll try!! Good ideas.
Jan 12, 2006 -
Re: *Nothing*
Are ytou just back from watching Chicken Little, The sky falling on your head and all that... Does this go anywhere? I don't really see what you mean, but that's ...
Jan 11, 2006 -
Re: Fast Food
Chairs, eh!! That's a good one. As a kid, I always tried to write things from different perspectives because the same things would bore the teacher, so I can identify ...
Jan 11, 2006 -
Re: Horses- Beautiful and Terrible
Why do u hate horses? Is it the smell? Ain't it luvly the way they gallop along with the Sun in the background, their tails blowing in the wind. Only, ...
Jan 5, 2006 -
Re: Be Cool
The scene comes in pretty quickly, the problem is that this is something that simply cannot be read as a poem. You should try framing it into a short prose. ...
Jan 2, 2006 -
Re: New Year's Drama....
[quote="Chandni13"] I have to choose quickly for my body is filled with fright. [/quote] It must be your mind, not your body!!! How in the world can your body be ...
Jan 1, 2006 -
Re: Bluebird
"Man was born free but everywher he is in shackles". I don't know which loony bin said that but he couldn't have been righter here. Goes 4 birds too.
Dec 20, 2005 -
Re: Clothes
These poems are really turning out to be SOMETHING!!! My friend caught me in school yesterday reciting to my mind this one about your laundry.
Dec 17, 2005 -
Re: Horses- Beautiful and Terrible
I gotta be honest here. I've never been to the stables. So the errors in the geography of the place. :)
Dec 17, 2005 -
Re: IT
Sounds like you penned down whatever came down to your mind. And it was a nice idea not to reveal what the beast was.
Dec 16, 2005 -
Re: Freely Falling Object
Nice and short by The Almighty Swine. :) Why did you choose Physics? Goes to show you really have spent more than enough time with Physics.
Dec 16, 2005 -
Re: Waistland (title intentionally misspelled)
:lol:
Dec 15, 2005 -
Re: Another Country
Nothing much that attracts me. No single line, or even a word. You need these things to draw the reader's attention. It'll make him think that he's reading what a ...
Dec 14, 2005 -
Re: Asher
You could use the spellcheck next time. But I'm keeping tabs as the story progresses. What's great is that you have not let your imagination run wild. Those wild stories ...
Dec 14, 2005 -
Re: The Crush on the Clerk
HA HA! Talking about your meals is more interesting than was thought. That'll set Firestarter on the backfoot, I'm sure.
Dec 14, 2005
