Shattered in tears as the clock's about to strike midnight,
I have to choose quickly for my body is filled with fright.
Mom, I don't wan't to make you sad,
But this is the only chance I've had,
I never before had to choose between you and dad.
Dad, all I want is to see you happy.
We don't live together a thing we both agree,
but just for once I wish you'd spend new year with me.
Why do I have to face this ? Why can't we all spend it together ?
I love you both,but right now there's too much pressure.
I can't deal with this, I just can't choose.
But when midnight strikes,
be sure to catch me on the news.
I promise I won't be with either one of you.
I don't care if it sucks It's just how I feel right now...I'm sorry Guys.. 
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I don't see any problem with that. That sentence seems fine to me. Or maybe it's just me. Chandni13, I like it =)
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I have to choose quickly for my body is filled with fright.
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It must be your mind, not your body!!! How in the world can your body be frightened!!!