JohnLocke1

I'm going to have to agree with the other reviews. This is simply a cliche, overused, fairly unimaginative plot. You need to add something to it so that it stands ...

I'm back to review the third chapter of your books. I am not going to say anything about grammar because I think I have given enough comment on that, so ...

I'm back to review the second chapter of your novel. First, Grammar. There were several grammatical errors in this piece, so I will list a few of them so that ...

To start, I will definitely read the rest of these chapters. This was very confusing to read. There was no consistency in your character's speech. They would talk the same ...

Although I cannot give as thorough a review as my colleague, Hannah the Poetry Master, I can give my general impressions of this piece. It felt very wordy and bulky. ...

I don't often review poetry, but I am certainly glad I chose this poem. My impressions of this poem were, right from the beginning, that it was real. I could ...

This was an interesting read for me. These two guys were enjoyable to read about. However, it needs to be expanded. Tell us more about Taylor and why she has ...

This is one of the most interesting stories I have read in a long time. I was enthralled by this human and lion on a journey together. It was very ...

Although I don't focus on grammar in my reviews, you need to fix the tenses in this piece. You switched from the present tense to the past tense. Stylistically, I ...

Although this was a very interesting and creative idea, I was often confused at times. Misspelled Words: "The inspector asked, kepping his eyes on his clipboard" I think you mean ...

Very interesting story concept. I was truly enthralled and I wanted to keep reading. However, I did find it a bit confusing. Perhaps if you elaborated on what they the ...

This was a very interesting story and a very good read. However, I am confused as to what happened? "I made a mistake" is far too vague for anything to ...

Slow it down! I am amazed at how you can place such a large amount of information into a small space. I feel as though there could have been some ...

This was all too fast. You need to slow down and extend this piece. Introduce Mae better because your main character should always be the most developed character. After reading ...

Besides the question marks and this all being contained within one paragraph, this story was fairly interesting. Slow it down and add more detail so that we as readers may ...