Jevan13

apologies for the lack of spacing guys. The editor refuses to space my paragraphs.

Soooo true!

Thank you so much. This is helpful advice and I'm glad that you at least found it to be of some merit.

Lol I certainly agree with you. Pluto, I still believe to be a planetary body due to size and geographical aspects. It may be crossing Neptune's orbit but that's all ...

Many thanks to you, Raven. This was useful advice and I just want to clear up an issue that bugs even me. The formatting slightly changed when I copy my ...

Oh wait, it is listed as humor. Never mind my stupidity %uD83D%uDE01

Oh wait, it is listed as humor. Never mind my stupidity %uD83D%uDE01

Thank you so much! This was actually one of the more descriptive poems that I have written. This actually happened to me one day, so I decided to put it ...

Yup no problem

Are you only reviewing for points because this helps in way at all. If you are hunting points only please don't review my work.

Thanks for the review. Just to clear something up, this is after he tried to be better and failed. This is a poem of giving up, losing the will to ...

My deepest gratitude I extend to you for your thoughtful review. I will take your suggestions and make the edits soon. I am happy that otherwise my poem was appealing ...

Thank you very much for the advice. I had felt that some things were out of place in it but hadn't the insight to identify them, so I thank you

Thank you so much for your suggestions! I understand the flaws you picked up and I will try my best to fix all of them in short time.

Wise words. I'll adhere to that.