JennyLeah

I really liked this. I'm not sure what it was, but it really caught my interest and right away. The only thing I didn't particularly like was the last line. ...

I liked it! I thought it was a cute little poem. :D You know, for being irritated and all. This explains almost exactly what I feel like when I argue ...

I thought it was pretty interesting as well that it was the speaker. I wasn't expecting that. They tell me to move along, that it's time to move on, Although, ...

I thought your use of words were rather clever. I enjoyed your 'darker' side of faith, as you say. Have you posted the lighter side yet? Everyone feels let down ...

This was probably my favorite all day. I don't think you need any advice other than punctuation. Just simple things, like, Would stares down on me like a cold wind ...

This was amusing, I'll give you that. A little light and fluffy, which isn't always bad. The only thing is that it seems like it could be a little more ...

I really liked this. It really fits for somebody who thinks they're fighting for something, and fighting for something thats worth it. Not raised to blend in But taught to ...

Hi! I liked the three isolated words in each paragraph. And I agree that being on a swing is a bit like flailing back and forth. But I do so ...

I'll be honest, once I started reading it, I almost didn't want to continue. Not because it was bad, but because I could feel the anger and hurt. So, I ...

I agree that it is a very interesting look at red. It seems that you are sad or hurt, and this is why you are thinking about the soldiers. Maybe ...

This seems a little mysterious to me, and I kind of like that. I can't exactly pinpoint one feeling to it. it comes when you make a joke then the ...

I thought this was sweet, truly. I think that most everyone(even men, tehe) feels like this over somebody, sometime. You captured the uncertainty, the back and forth thoughts rather well. ...