Jennafina

Quick note-- it's a YWS rule that for every piece of writing you post, you should review three or so things by other people. This will help with your own ...

Hey, Fantasyfreak. I've read a lot of poems very much like this, with the theme of "I'm alone, nobody cares, so I hurt myself." It's not a bad theme in ...

Hey, Man on the Side. It's great that you're posting your work! There is a rule though that for each piece of art or writing you post, you should review ...

Hello! I think the format you've got is correct for an all dialogue piece. As I was saying.. oh, whatever, you made me forget. Should be, "As I was saying... ...

Hey, Young gun! Thanks for the link to this. You've chosen an interesting format for this. At first it seemed a little strange, but the more I read the more ...

Hello, Mr. Knightley, I'm Jenna and I will be your reviewer for today. :) The first thing I think you should do is completely get rid of the last line, ...

Amber, my friend, don't be sorry! I would be very happy to review anything you write. Ever. :) I like your poem a lot, it made me smile. In the ...

Your story had me interested from the first sentence. I like what she says about beautiful boys, and when he sits down it's almost sexual? I'm not sure if that's ...

Hey, I'm Jenna. The first line grabbed me. Before I read another word, I was hooked. Reading onward, though, I'm pretty disappointed that you made it rhyme. For lack of ...

I love the words you used. Some that stood out to me especially were crooked, boisterous, prance, and treacherous. All of these are very specific: they give the reader a ...

Wow! You use a lot of really cool words! Your title drew me in. I was instantly hooked, starting at line one. If you were to punctuate this, especially at ...

Interesting. :) It looks like you have a lot of passion-- that's great for writing! I have a couple suggestions that might help with this, or in your future works. ...

Hey, Razors! I'm kind of the perfect person to give this a critique. (I'm currently on pass, getting to use the computer for the first time in 32 days! Yay.) ...

This is one of the most beautiful books I've ever read, if not the most. It seriously changed the way I think. a little. If you're not far into it, ...

I'm sure I don't understand this poem. I don't even claim to. However, there are a lot of poems I don't fully understand that I still can appreciate and enjoy. ...