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Re: what to write?
Hello hello! I am here to review your poem "What to Write?" The first time I read this, I thought about my own mind, and how I never know what ...
Jun 2, 2020 -
Re: napo2020 #4
Hello there! I hope all is well, my name is JellyRose and I am here to give you a review. Right away, I love this. The first time I read ...
May 2, 2020 -
Re: Hedieh Askari's Crusade, Intro
Hello there, I'm JellyRose and I am here to give a review on, "Hedieh Askari's Crusade, Intro." Alright let's get started, shall we? :) I am going to try something ...
May 2, 2020 -
Re: Loyalty
Hi there, I am JellyRose and I am here to leave you a review. I was very attached to the main character and their Master the second I started reading ...
May 2, 2020 -
Re: Paralyzed Collective - A Series of Art I Don???t Remember Doing
Well, that is such an interesting concept, instead of sleepwalking into walls or whatever else, your subconscious is like, "Ah yes let me draw something instead!" That is so cool! ...
May 1, 2020 -
Re: .
Hello, I am JellyRose, and I am here to review your work, "I forgive you." I have to look up the piece that this was inspired by, but for now, ...
May 1, 2020 -
Re: all of me squeezed out in pieces
Hi there, I am here to review! I am fascinated by the way the poem is formatted. I like how the word going is in a different spot from the ...
May 1, 2020 -
Re: I Attempted Art
Oh my, goodness is that my baby Panty- Sorry I love her so much, and the way you drew her in your style is so awesome. I recognized her like ...
May 1, 2020 -
Re: Bullet On My Dresser
Hi there, I am here to review, "Bullet On My Dresser". Alright let's get started, shall we? I'm already in the first lines in, and I can heavily relate to ...
May 1, 2020 -
Re: Flat White with 2 pumps of heart break
Hello there! I am here to review your work, "Flat White With 2 Pumps of Heart Break". Alright let's get started, shall we? I am loving the descriptions in the ...
May 1, 2020 -
Re: A poem that would horrify my mother
This hit me. I felt every one of your words. I don't know your entire situation at all, but I can relate to this on many levels. I had to ...
Apr 30, 2020 -
Re: An Incomplete Drawing of Billie Eilish
Wow! This is already really awesome! I love the shading and how you blend. Your anatomy and structure is already really good. Now, the only issue I see is the ...
Apr 30, 2020 -
Re: I wish I hadn’t wished away my time
As someone who almost graduated from college this year (but due to personal events I could not), my friends are though, are just as devastated as you. It's like you ...
Apr 29, 2020 -
Re: Guys Like You
Hello, I'm Rose. I stumbled upon this piece. And let me tell you this reminded me of my ex-girlfriend, who broke up with me four months ago. Like this was ...
Jun 6, 2017 -
Re: I was young and dumb
Hi there I am JellyRose! And let me just say: wow! I read this and felt so many emotions at once, and just wow. The first line alone spooked me, ...
May 10, 2017
