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Re: Fantasies and Daydreams Never End Like Fairy Tales and Lullabys
Thank you! I have about 6 or so out
Aug 16, 2013 -
Re: Fantasies and Daydreams Never End Like Fairy Tales and Lullabys
This is a rare site indeed, a poem of mine that is not sad.
Aug 16, 2013 -
Re: Another Knight's Tale Chapter 1
There are definitely things I can do to improve on. It was actually my first take on writing a story, i'm gonna take a little time gather my thoughts and ...
Aug 15, 2013 -
Re: What Penguins Really Think
Best thing i've seen all day
Aug 14, 2013 -
Re: Dreams
That's alot of reviews :O
Aug 14, 2013 -
Re: Sweet Words You Used To Say
Thankee
Aug 14, 2013 -
Re: Sweet Words You Used To Say
Thank you, joining this site and learning to accept the criticism has already helped me think more about how I write. I typically enjoy using fore and nye but by ...
Aug 14, 2013 - Re: Butterfly Kisses Aug 14, 2013
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Re: Another Knight's Tale Chapter 1
The italics represented his inner thoughts, I wasn't sure how to make that clear with out dumbing it down with 5000 he thought.....or pondered sirjosh. "she tells me goodbye my ...
Aug 14, 2013 -
Re: You and I
Indeed!
Aug 14, 2013 -
Re: Just Because
It was written in 5 minutes, as most of my poems are. It's vague, it's generalized, and I choose in many poems not to use alot of punctuation. It makes ...
Aug 13, 2013 -
Re: This is How the Note Read
I'll just send all my poems to you to make them all purdyfull!
Aug 13, 2013 -
Re: Such A Beautiful Nightmare
I added the punctuation to it just now, as I wanted to show my versatility. I think I did make a mistake capping that I believe i'll fix it. I ...
Aug 13, 2013 -
Re: This is How the Note Read
Everyone don't forget to like my poems I'd like more people to see them Thank you all! JC
Aug 13, 2013 -
Re: Just Because
Everyone don't forget to like my poems I'd like more people to see them Thank you all! JC
Aug 13, 2013