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Hi, J.C. here for a review. Okay, this one thought me for a loop. A big loop. The man message you are sending is quite obvious, "They say people create ...

Hi, J.C. here for a review! Like Aley said, I'll try to ignore the lack of formatting (paragraphs and sentence structure,) as well as the consistent grammar mistakes. Those affect ...

Hi, J.C. here for a review! Okay, this is just a pet peeve, but I can't stand the name Kayden, but that's just me. Moving on to the review, this ...

Hi, J.C. here for a review! So, first off, I have to say I enjoyed reading this very much. It's so hard to right Fantasy today, simply because there's so ...

Hi, J.C. here for a review! "Some occasions a man needs to be alone, and others a man needs to show off the fact that he doesn't have to walk ...

Hi, J.C. here for a review! Luminescent, the falling light of the moon cast an eerie glow over all left uncovered. So you start out with this line. It's a ...

Hi, J.C. here for a review! Okay, I thought this was awesome because, how many of us can relate? I've watched several series all the way through in a few ...

Hi, J.C. here for a review! He lets loose peals of slobber that drench everybody I found myself laughing her, mostly because my family has this gigantic dog that runs ...

Hi, J.C. here for a review! She peels a piece of translucent tape off of me, that had been keeping the... needle, from sliding out of my flesh. So the ...

Hi, J.C. here for a review! I must say, that first line...epic! The houses along Shrewsbury Road were like red-brick ghosts, their windows and doors gaping like the eyes and ...

Hi, J.C. here for a review! You finally wrote it! Lol. As far as composition goes, it's not a spectacular poem, in my opinion, but it's better than "Red solo ...

Hi, J.C. here for a review! Our path is laced with rows of concertina, So, first thing I noticed was this line, obviously. Instantly I'm transported to a sort of ...

Hi, J.C. here for a review! Okay, this is really, really unique. Probably one of the most "out there" pieces I've seen on YWS, honestly. Who comes up with this ...

Hi, J.C. here for a review! Well, I can't say that I agree with anything you've said here, but, doesn't matter much :D In any case, I thought this was ...

Hi, J.C. here for a review! Well, as you've partially explained, this is more the explanation of a book idea than part of the writing itself, so I'll judge it ...