Excellent and original! Keep writing!
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abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz - I found my letters
qwertyuiopasdfghjklzxcvbnm - we were all reordered
i love you - requires more thought
ask- was a bit of a jump
please - comes quite easily
123456789 - that works til 'ten'
1-0 - we are split up like scores
Insert-Home-Page Up-Delete-End-Page Down - we've all got functions
Num lock - rattle snake grip on the emotions
1 is the end
3 takes you down
7 my favourite, takes me home
9 lifts me up
Print my screen - show my life
And then there's Formula 1
But F2, F3, F4, F5, F6, F7, F8, F9, F10, F11, F12 - and I've no idea what they all serve.
Then I press End.
Hey, victorianbeauty here to give a (hopefully) awesome review!!! Lol Anyways, I'll get down to business.
Firstly, may I just say how much I love this poem. It's so random and doesn't fit in at all with the cliche group of pieces we usually see on this site. Amazing! And now, for the nit-picks! *evil laugh* Just Kidding!
abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz - I found my letters
qwertyuiopasdfghjklzxcvbnm - we were all reordered
i love you - requires more thought
ask- was a bit of a jump
please - comes quite easily
Insert-Home-Page Up-Delete-End-Page Down - we've all got functions
Num lock - rattle snake grip on the emotions
Hi, J.C. here for a review!
Okay, this is really, really unique. Probably one of the most "out there" pieces I've seen on YWS, honestly. Who comes up with this sort of thing? (*cough cough*)
abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz - I found my letters
qwertyuiopasdfghjklzxcvbnm - we were all reordered
i love you - requires more thought
ask- was a bit of a jump
please - comes quite easily
Num lock - rattle snake grip on the emotions
Print my screen - show my life
And then there's Formula 1
Hello there!
This is really good! I interpreted it as a metaphor for society and how it changes us, and you did an excellent job of it. I love how you used the computer functions to tie it all together.
qwertyuiopasdfghjklzxcvbnm - we were all reordered
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