JayeCShore

Hi, J.C. here for a review! First thing I notice is your dialogue. While not particularly elegant, it gets the job done, and is fun to read. Bantering is always ...

Hi, J.C. here for a review! While this still was enjoyable to read, I felt it wasn't as polished as the last chapter. Still a good read, though. They ended ...

Hi, J.C. here for a review! The smell of wax and paper spread across the room like a haze. I love it when writers blur the lines between the senses, ...

Hi, J.C. here for a review! While reading through this, I enjoyed the read, but there were so many small mistakes, mostly grammatical, that I had a hard time swallowing ...

Hi, J.C. here for a review! The middle-aged tub of a woman with a love for motivational pins (or so I hoped, otherwise she should fire her costume designer), made ...

Hi, J.C. here for a review! I think the most alarming part is that I've become oddly acceptant of this. It sucks, but I've learned to accept the suck and ...

Hi, J. C. her for a review! First off, I note with excitement, that I'm in your book! Ledan only stared Jay’s back while he was walking away. Ledan sighed ...

Hi, J.C. here for a review! Honestly, I think it's smart to do this, that is, write the end before you've gotten to the end. Not only does it establish ...

Hi, J.C. here for a review! John walked around the carpet ball table and began setting his balls up in the same way he always did. It seemed that no ...

Hi, J.C. here for a review! She swims as fast as she can, her tail beating ripples through the water. But the boat chases after her just as quickly. Four ...

Hi, J.C. here for a review! I step over the threshold into the loud, crammed school. Everyone under eighteen, unless you graduated early, has to go to school. Unfortunately, someone ...

Hi, J.C. here for a review! I started digging a hole when I was five and I lied to my mother. Like Strange said, I thought it was great that ...

Hi, J.C. here for a review! The ‘gang’ crowed around me and an unusual sense of nervousness filled my stomach. I would assume you meant "crowded." I then realized I ...

Hi, J.C. here for a review! I...I don't know what to say. I read this, and I was stunned, quite literally. Yah, everybody else laughs and thinks it's so funny, ...

Hi, J.C. here for a review! This story was epic! I remember doing this sort of thing during elementary school and loving it. And I'd do the same thing. I ...