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Jashael

Jashael

  • Other » General, General Re: Trying to Define Art

    WOW, disregard the un-thoughtfullness of not capitalizing letters that should have been capitalized, this is E-P-I-C. I have no other words for it, especially now that I know the un-capitalization ...

    Feb 20, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Uprising Ch.1

    You don't know how excited I am to review this. This will be my first review for a sci-fi! Yay me! And thanks, Sporks - for the explanation, I mean. ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Happy Valentine's Day

    Oh, yeah! Please review! Thanks! Since you asked... =)) and since I'm in my reviewing mode. Warning though, I can be a little harsh. *cracks knuckles* Hey, Sol, I'm here ...

    Feb 15, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Untitled

    Hey, Savannah! Once again, I welcome you to this site! I've found you at the Welcome Matt, and yep, as you requested, I decided to check out your stuff. I'm ...

    Feb 13, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Blood chapt.1

    Hey, girl. Thanks for the request. I'm here as promised. I'm going to cut this review in two posts 'cause it'll be easier. First part is for the prologue; second ...

    Feb 13, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Valentine

    Wow... you've got a line of "piano solo". With all the repeated lines, it's a good thing, I assume, that you've already got a melody for it. :D Nice job, ...

    Feb 12, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Old

    Hey, Unc. POST 1/2 NIPTPICKS first. You know my format. =) I glanced into the mirror one more time, a bit more pleased now that the colour had returned back ...

    Feb 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Nothing Rhymes With Purple

    I loooooooooove this! :lol: Not much to say really. I just wanted to say that I loved it. :D How could you have thought of this? So cool... *clicks like*

    Feb 8, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Kiss Me, before I Die

    I'm kind of a sucker for a story about holocaust... I'll try to get to this... if you want. :) I've read Night, Number the Stars, Mad Desire to Dance, ...

    Feb 6, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Love Story chapter 1: Just the Begining

    I'm finally here deary. :) COLOR CODE: NITPICKS | ADDED | CHANGED | PAY ATTENTION Nitpick #1 FORMATTING Bold and italics Who calls at 7 in the morning? I thought. ...

    Feb 5, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Old

    Hey Skinso, as you've requested. I'm here in a jiffy. LOL But I was already thinking of reviewing this since yesterday, nuh... I just didn't get to linger with the ...

    Feb 5, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: My guardian dog (Edited!) OLD

    Hey, mom. I'm here for a review. :D COLOR CODE: NITPICKS | ADDED | CHANGED | PAY ATTENTION Nitpick #1 I wasn’t always this jaded but working nightshift in a ...

    Feb 4, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Stop and Stare (Part 5)

    Hey, Skinso. I'm back and making it up for being oh so long gone. HAHA... OK, so as I expected, I wouldn't have anything to nitpick. I wouldn't have to ...

    Feb 4, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: DELETED!

    Hey there, Shubs. It's been awhile. Oh, I love the cover! Haha...kidding. :) Wait...vitamincakes? LOL I'll divide this into three parts, so it'll be easier for me. (Long posts make ...

    Feb 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Did I Drown

    NITPICKS | ADDED | CHANGED | PAY ATTENTION The sun shone bright on a hot summer day As I splashed inside the pool I went no farther than the four ...

    Feb 3, 2011


Poetry and prayer are very similar.
— Carol Ann Duffy