Published February 11, 2011
(INTRO)
Will it happen
My dear
Will ya finally say it
Admit it
You know you wanna do it
Will it happen
My dear
Will you finally shout it
Sing it
You know you really wanna do it
Like I said
Throw back your shoulders
Let your heart sing it out
Let your mind
Let it shout
Go forward
Don't go backward
Yeahhh….
(VERSE 1)
Can’t help myself
I’m just a girl
And you’re just such a guy
Who’s outta this world
You know that you are
I’m sure you do
You’re like a shooting star
Just going far
Away, away, away….
(And I say,
Dream baby
Dream away
Cause you’re gonna get me someday
You know you want me
I know you do
And I say,
Dream baby
Dream away
Cause you’re gonna have me someday
You know you’re gonna get me someday
You know you will
I know you will )(X2)
(And
I’ve asked you once
Won’t ask you twice
Will you be my valentine tonight)(X4)
(Piano Solo)
The End
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Wow... you've got a line of "piano solo". With all the repeated lines, it's a good thing, I assume, that you've already got a melody for it.
Nice job, girl. Ain't no reviews yet? Well, I think there's a problem. I just have a suggestion with the format. Edit this and put it in "poem" mode so the space between the lines will squeeze in a bit and it will be easier to read. Just click edit, roll down the page, and you'll see a line of four format choices: default, poem, story and none. Click in the "poem" and you'll be good. 
So there... KEEP WRITING! 