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Jashael

Jashael

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Runner

    THE RUNNER Feet thumping across pavement, His heart racing, lungs pumping. 'I'm Flying!' he thinks. Nothing can stop him now, He's Invincible! He is having the love affair he once ...

    Oct 4, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Spell Check

    A poem I did for class. The idea was to prove in the poem that the narrator of the poem was clearly wrong, so I chose to do somebody who ...

    Oct 4, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Daddy?

    Please pay attention to the red parts. :) I wrote this awhile ago, theres a few bugs still in it though... Look at me daddy look what I did. I ...

    Oct 2, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: True Love

    The Lord above created you for me to love He picked me out of all the rest Because he knew I would love you best Take care oh my heart ...

    Oct 2, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Inner Beauty

    Hello, guitargirl. (I love your name by the way) I'll be reviewing your short story for today. Here it goes... A pointless little thing that I've seen happen at my ...

    Sep 29, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Apologizing

    Dear Hello Hey I'm sorry. Let's just get down to the point. I'm sorry that I fell so hard for you, and I'm sorry that I have to give you ...

    Sep 29, 2010
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Fifteen Years

    Hello, Blue Africa, (may I call you BA? :) ) Yes, this sounds more of a prologue. Did you have any thoughts of writing it to a novel? It's good. ...

    Sep 29, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I Die

    I dodge lightening bolts In a raging storm. I'm searching for shelter, For all around me is darkness. I'm running in a direction, One I can't identify. I'm screaming for ...

    Sep 29, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Hatred

    Hatred Red, bloody Deep clenching Inside Anger Thrown in For a spice Chicken and rice No connection Yet the same I hate you I hate them I hate him, her, ...

    Sep 29, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I Don't Write Love Poems

    I don't write love poems, silly cliches that barely pass as a life form on planet YWS. I wouldn't cross my raves on predictable lines, with a couplet about the ...

    Sep 29, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: These Scars

    Love is a malicious gift, Delicious torment, A toxic kiss. Love, from whence this poision drips, Destroys my will, My will to live. This burning pain is all I have, ...

    Sep 29, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Killing myself

    "You coward" I scream. "Just take it all away!" "I wish i could! But i just dont think i can take the pain. The knife i hold inside my hand, ...

    Sep 28, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: A Night To Remember

    A night to remember Sasha sighed slowly as she stood silently in the great room. Her crème dress was beautiful and perfect for the party that her parents had organised ...

    Sep 18, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Invisible

    Sometimes I feel invisible No one sees me No one hears me No one notices me No one cares. Sometimes I wonder if anyone would notice if I just disappeared ...

    Sep 18, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Depressing Rain!!!

    Rain is depressing Rain is calming Rain is salvation Rain is death Rain is depression, when you stand in it for to long then you just stay depressed Rain is ...

    Sep 17, 2010


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