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Jashael

Jashael

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Living on the Edge

    Hello, Triskiller! I'm jb and I'll be reviewing your work today. I can see that I'm the first to review. My comments will be in pinkish font. H ello everyone. ...

    Oct 19, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: A shot of Arrogance (Chapter Three)

    Hi, Skins! Here again. =)) A Shot of Arrogance ~ Chapter Three The official page thingy for A Shot of Arrogance. Join and you get a monkey. :smt001 “Ollie?” Ella ...

    Oct 18, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Hate or Love? *edited*

    Hi, Nike! (ohh, reminds me of my Nike, red shirt that I utterly love) I am Jash, and I'll be reviewing you tonight. =) My comments will be in pinkish ...

    Oct 18, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: White Eyes (part one)

    Hello, Ig (hope the nickname's fine)! First, I thank you for your request. =) So here comes our review. Though, I have to tell you that, I'll review the prologue ...

    Oct 18, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I Guess This is Good Bye

    Hey, Danielle! As requested, I am here. =) This is quite a long poem. I'm not a fan of long poetry, but I'll try my best. My comments will be ...

    Oct 17, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Beautiful Inside, Ugly Outside

    We paint our skins beautiful with arts of ink rings and studs We paint our outside beautiful I'm really not a fan of the word "outside". It think the first ...

    Oct 17, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Dreams *Rewritten* Introduction

    Hello, lilgreendots! We've known each other for awhile now, but this will a be a first time reviewing you, right? =) I'm glad. Okay, my comments will be in pinkish ...

    Oct 16, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: A shot of Arrogance (Chapter Two)

    Hi, Skins! Jash here again. :) I hope you know the drill: comments in pinkish font. A Shot of Arrogance ~ Chapter Two The official page thingy for A Shot ...

    Oct 16, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: As you well know (my first prose poem)

    As you well know, those were dark times for our fair city of Acre. The crime index was already twice the national average when the first murders of the infamous ...

    Oct 16, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Happy Death

    Hello, dasiamari! Jash here to review this morning (it's midnight. =) ) okaaay, comments in pinkish font. I am dancing on your grave twirling a ribbon over cold corpse Tears ...

    Oct 15, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Say This is a Title

    Hey, Jenna. I can't believe how new you are and how many posts blogs you've posted. Haha! Anyway, tonight, I'll be reviewing you. My comments are in pinkish font. He’s ...

    Oct 15, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Monster Within

    Hello, Maddy! I'm jash and I'll be reviewing your work today. I don't normally read short stories (I'm often lurking at the poetry and novel sections) but I just thought ...

    Oct 15, 2010
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Nature's secrets

    Hi, Foxy! I'm glad that I'll be reviewing you today--err, tonight. :D/ Anyway, my comments will be in pinkish font. As always. :) There she was with her native village ...

    Oct 14, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: A Shot of Arrogance (Chapter One - Old)

    Hi, Skins! Finally, got the time to review this. I didn't want to just wooooosh reading, if you know what I mean. LOL My comments in pinkish fonts. Trust me, ...

    Oct 14, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: How Could You?

    Hello, Alicia! I'm glad to finally read a poem by you. My comments in pinkish fonts. How could you, Leave me alone, Crying , Without any love? How could you, ...

    Oct 14, 2010


No spring nor summer beauty hath such grace as I have seen in one autumnal face.
— John Donne