Jaliayh101

i liked it a lot i really love stories with diary entries i dont know if you knew this but you could have put in fanfiction for the book series ...

First, of all I really didn't get this. Second, of all you completely stole a title that was already taken. If you want to base it off that "Disturbia" movie ...

That was really weird it didn't make sense at all!!!! We all know Carly doesn't like dares or bets. It was just weird... It didn't make sense at all!!!! Wait, ...

This is my fave paragraph.. “What kind of a loser has a party at 3:00 anyways?” he reasoned stalling on the balconey. “Nah dude I’m gonna pass on this one.” ...

I really like your story Edward Cullen was evil. What was left of his former human self was gone. His heart beat no longer and he was cruel, merciless; the ...

this story was so weird as i read it seemed like everything was just he was the only human on bored and blaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa blaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb

omg i really like this song i really didnt know the tempo so i put it in my own way and it was just great i really liked it i ...

wow i really like your story it is a straight A plus you gave a lot of details you made the characters seem like they were actually there well i ...

agin i was confused by another poem you guys have to got to put in more details you just can't say "His lips pursed unto mines and I fainted. That ...

wow....you made me feel lifeless for a moment after reading that poem i was kind of gasping for breath. Maybe you should put this poem in dramtic poetry come on ...

I was very confused reading that poem maybe you could've gave more deails I mean what are you saying are you saying you like being free when you run through ...

ha, ha, ha that was a really funny poem i hope you aint 'gangsta foe real cuz if u is i pray for you anyways if you're not that was ...

OMG this story is so amazing i really can't imagine that sweet, sweet Herminoe or however you speel her name being a sex kitten this girl sounded more like a ...

wow...this story is so good you are making me want to study more about the world war one it is so interesting i wonder what will happen when the whistle ...

what a way to wow the crowd you know everything there is to know about being a story writer even if you didn't know you were very smart to use ...