Published May 9, 2008
[pre]Some are fond of sunshine;
Well...So am i
But i like the rain, too,
Falling from the sky
For when merry April
Trips o'er hill and plain
Isn't it delightful.
Running through the rain... [/pre]
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I was very confused reading that poem
maybe you could've gave more deails
I mean what are you saying are you saying
you like being free when you run through the rain
or that you're different from others i was just very confusesd
i could hardly make anythign out of your poem
except for the suggestions I gave above
maybe you redo this and put some of my tips in
why do you like the rain while everybody prefers sunshine
is it because you don't fit in you feel like your free
from all the troubles in the world wha please
give us more details oh and you're welcome