Jadefox

Hey again! This time around, I'm only going to review the story since everybody beat me to the chase for nitpicks! I am still enjoying this story! What can I ...

Hey, there! I meant to review this a few days ago but didn't get the chance. So here I am, reviewing! Whelp, let's get the few remaining edits there are. ...

Hey there, Jadefox here to review! First off, I enjoyed it. It's a good introduction that allows the reader to get oriented. I liked how you started off by introducing ...

Alright, review time! I don't believe I've ever read any of your works so it was a real pleasure. Anyways, let's get started. I'm going to start with my nitpicks. ...

Hey there! Thought I'd return the review favor since you already gave me some wonderful critics. (Thanks!) Okay, let's dive in. I'm all about quick short intros that get to ...

Hey there! Jade here for her first review on review day so congrats 'o lucky one! So the introduction to a fabulous novel is the first step in a very ...

Hey There! So congrats on your first post! I enjoy how you write. You describe just enough but not too much, and still give the reader a good description. For ...

Hey there! Okay, you definitely have me intrigued. What pulled me into this story was your vivid descriptions of Ayla. For example: Her long, gray hair fell around her. The ...

Hey there, This story made me smile right at the first sentence. My feet stumbled a bit on my way to stage; I felt piercing stares searing my back. It ...

Hey Sherlock, So I was reading your poem and my iPod shuffled to Switchfoot's "Always." I don't know if that was a coincidence or not, but that was probably the ...

Hey there fellow Dragon, So poetry isn't really my thing, so let's see how this goes. Overall, I enjoyed it. The use of the old sailor reminded me of the ...

Hey there, So I know you didn't want me to review your story, but I really wanted to so I am. I promised I'm not going to bag on grammar ...

Hey there, I am an animal person. Let alone that, a pit bull person also. In the movies writers, directors, producers, whoever refrain themselves from causing a lead animal or ...

Hey there, You have me caught up in this story and I keep forgetting to nitpick! I actually found something this time because I was paying attention in the beginning. ...

Hey there, Before writing this review, I do solomnely swear that it shall be longer than my review in Chapter One, if I should call that a review. First off, ...