JabberHut

Hello! :D By the looks of it, you have one cool and creepy story to look forward to! The idea with the creepy darkness and the logs falling randomly are ...

Sorry for the wait! Because you have so many comments, I figure I'll go ahead and review without reading anyone else's review before mine. Maybe I'll say something completely new, ...

I'm here for you! I've got time to kill, so let's do this review, ja? :D And forgive me for anything confusing because I'm definitely no poet. First off, I ...

Well, here's another pointless review coming your way, and you'll see why I'm not fit for TWS as of yet. ;D First off, it made me giggle when I read ...

Oooh, some Shrive! Lol, dude. I started reading this, and the first paragraph is of people dancing, right? Well, as I was reading that, the song "Carol of the Birds" ...

I'm back again! So we have some great action, that's for sure. Especially at the end when Bryn's beating up Xavier. You should definitely take more time to talk about ...

Hi! So, oh my gosh, this story totally has potential. Like... the ending was great, and I have an idea that could improve the story, let alone make the ending ...

Hi there! I went ahead and read chapter 1 before coming here, so hopefully I didn't miss anything while reading. One huge problem I'm seeing is description. You have some, ...

Ooh, I've never heard of this author. By the sounds of it though, I'd be rather interested. I've been reading or hearing about so many contemporary novels that a historical ...

Hello again! I saw this, and was like... Oh em gee, I know Elma! So I clicked, and here I am! It looks like we have ourselves a writing exercise, ...

Greetings! Forgive me for my lack of poetry knowledge. It's going to be odd critiquing a three-line poem constricted to only 17 syllables, haha. Your idea is very cute. I ...

Hi there! Now, I didn't read any of the chapters before this, so forgive me for missing any details you previously mentioned. ^^ This definitely moved almost too fast for ...

Hey, Mage! I finally got to seeing your magazine! It looks like you put a lot of work into this (and I know you did)! It turned out very well. ...

Hello! I'm not fantastic in reviewing lyrics, so forgive any nonsense that you may read. :D You have a very cool concept here! As usual, I wish I could hear ...

Hi! This was a very interesting little piece. In fact, I loved how you tied in the metaphor of writing throughout the whole thing. It really made my heart happy ...