http://issuu.com/r.a.m./docs/rising_art ... e_1_temple
Above is the link to my first issue of my magazine. I hope you all will just take a look at it. Just copy the link and paste it in your search bar. I hope you guys like it. Also, please comment!!! 
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Since Jabber caught the grammar stuff all I can really say is to go back and look through it, you'll see the mistakes. It looks really cool and I can tell it was hard to put together. I don't think I could ever do something like that. I can't wait to see the next issue
~peanut~
Hey, Mage! I finally got to seeing your magazine!
It looks like you put a lot of work into this (and I know you did)! It turned out very well. There were plenty of different works there and a few extras in there like a cooking recipe. What would be neat is if you had a word search or crossword -- some sort of little word game. A lot of magazines have that. I know I, for one, love doing those!
Also, there were plenty of grammar mistakes just in the publisher's notes. You want cleaned up, very good grammar if you wish to get a broader audience. You want to look professional, even if it is just for kicks!
Sounds like you'll be having a second issue, so I can't wait to see it! Very neat magazine. The best part is that you stuck with the idea instead of giving up halfway through. I know you had a lot of hardships as you worked on this, and it makes my heart happy to see that you stuck with it and came out with a finished product.
Keep writing!
Jabber, the One and Only!
I loved this
Especially your poem!!
~Classy