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Re: Show & Tell
Hello again, AJ! So I actually liked what you were doing with the verses here. In fact, the first verse was actually really awesome. It certainly tied in with the ...
May 25, 2012 -
Re: Paranoid Schizophrenic's Lullaby
Hi, AJ! I like how well you portrayed the voice here. There is definitely a serious sense of paranoia. And it definitely gave me the willies in some of those ...
May 25, 2012 -
Re: No Answers
Hi, Star! :D I feel this has some good moments. It's certainly an understandable voice, so the reader can relate to it enough. The story is told through all the ...
May 25, 2012 -
Re: Devil at my Heels
Hello again, Street! I'm not sure this is a song again. Maybe lyrics poetry.... But I know nothing about poetry, so who am I to judge? lol. I'll review it ...
May 25, 2012 -
Re: Harlequin
Hi, Dancer! So this is really just... awesome. It kinda really is. A lot of songs are in 4/4, so it's an extremely fun discovery running into a 3/4 song ...
May 25, 2012 -
Re: Wont Be There
Hey, Amarii! Interesting piece. It tells the story very well, and it gives us a very nice glimpse into the speaker's character. It's pretty simple, too, and the listener can ...
May 25, 2012 -
Re: Not A Fairytale Ending
Hi, Dasia! Awww. I find this is one of your better pieces of the ones I read today, anyway. I liked it! I liked some of the references to the ...
May 25, 2012 -
Re: Your Story
Hello again, Carlito! You're just so awesome at lyrics. The rhythm, the words, the flow... it's just always so good. You're awesome! Oh, dear. I fear this review will be ...
May 25, 2012 -
Re: Before I go.
Hey there, Kookies! I'm not sure this is a song. I'm wondering if you had meant poetry? I'm sorry if I misinterpreted, but I'm going to review this as a ...
May 25, 2012 -
Re: A Chemical Imbalance
Hi, alabaster! You have an interesting piece here. The last verse I thought was most interesting. It was a cool ending to this sort of song -- rather suspenseful. Or ...
May 25, 2012 -
Re: Won't you please listen?
Hi, SparkleDoubt! You say this is a Christian song, but I think it can totes be taken as a generic song, too. In the end, it's encouraging. It provides hope ...
May 25, 2012 -
Re: Trillionaire
Hey, Vampire! I'm rather impressed with how this song was done. There were certainly a bunch of modern references that made it much more enjoyable for the reader/listener. You've a ...
May 25, 2012 -
Re: Proady of "Love the way you lie part 2"
So! Hi, Dasia! :D I think that's meant to say "parody" in the title? But I don't know know the song (or whatever it may be) is, so I'm just ...
May 25, 2012 -
Re: Can't Do Anything
Hi, CStar! This is cute, and I can certainly relate to it as the audience. However, I do think this song is a bit contradictory between verses, and so I ...
May 25, 2012 -
Re: The tears of the young
SPARKLEDOUBT! This is a very beautiful song. As an older sister, I totes understand your side of this story. It's hard having to let them out sometimes, but they're about ...
May 25, 2012