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Okay so BASICALLY I love this idea of Isadora hanging out with Margaretta alone. We haven't seen this happen since the beginning of the novel when she was with her ...

HAHAHAHA I died when Enoch told Cassius he needed the most help with his swordplay. ahahahahaha gosh, man, I LOVE that this is how Cassius is going to train swords ...

I AM SO HAPPY TO BE BAAAAAAACK This was so fuuuun and I loved exploring this city and it was so fantastic and you did so well writing in Isadora's ...

Oh man, this is nutty. Gosh, I'd be curious as to how and why Duliop is manipulating Mehren like this. It seems very indicative of Duliop being involved from the ...

Oooooh this is a fun PoV switch, if only temporary, but I like how it sets up the scene for Erson reading the letter. It's like a cool flashback you'd ...

There are a lot of things I love about Buck, and one of those things is how his brain observes his surroundings. That opening paragraph of him admiring the passageway ...

I would have been SO surprised if Alkset was able to give the physics explanation of how the carriage worked as she almost sounded like she could. XD BUT she ...

Ohhh I loved this so muuuuch. There's so much cute and fun and chill and relax and asld;fkjsdf BUT I totally see through your explanation here, and I 100% thank ...

I found it hilarious that as soon as they all sat down, Erson was like "hey let's step our for a minute". And I feel like that was intentional judging ...

I freaking love how this ended hahahahahaha. Everyone was so awkward and only a couple of them managed to recover okay and I am just in smiles, I love this ...

Gosh, Simone is so cuuute. I have to commend you for making Simone so freaking cute when it would be so easy to make her creepy crawly scary. And it ...

I'M BAAAAAACK and man, what a way to hop back into this I looove how this conversation turned out. It read so smoothly and it didn't feel farfetched at all. ...

That discussion ended so much sooner than I had hoped. :( I really would love to see this conversation prolonged a bit, and maybe Zoltar withholding the diamond information could ...

Ooooh she's so leadery, I love it! The queen definitely acts like a queen, which pleases me so much 'cause there's a reason she's [still] on the throne. I like ...

IT'S OKAY ZOLTAR. They don't know your fire's gone!! omgomg the queen is the lightning dragon is she old and wise beyond her years I wonder how she's been unable ...