JabberHut

HELLO AND GOOD MORNING! :D Oooh you are so right, the start of this chapter goes immediately into Zoltar's thinking process and how he's handling his grief. This completes that ...

Gosh, I just honestly love this so freaking much. I truly believe you have a gem on your hands that, with some good polish, could be such a beautiful piece ...

omg this chapter The pacing of this chapter is phenomenal. I was on the edge of my seat through the whole thing, it pulled my emotions in different directions, it ...

Hello! I love how emotional your piece is, and it's so very relatable. The message gets across very clearly, and you have some really strong vocabulary here. It actually hit ...

GOOOOOOD MORNING! He had no idea what would be waiting for them beyond the beach. “That the island?” Scorpus asked, his eyes still trained on the pillars ahead “Yes Sir. ...

Ooooh, yay, we're going to the island! I'm glad Scorpus is back. I'm kind of bummed we didn't get to hear about Scorpus' mission and why he didn't return sooner, ...

HELLO AGAIN! :D So I've already read through the chapter now, and I absolutely love so much about this. This review might be more just gushing and less constructive. Though, ...

I AM HERE! Bahahaha I am so proud of Ella, though I am STILL left wondering why she was so sad earlier. This was not the news I expected to ...

HIIII! I hope you don't mind my stopping by. I'm digging for a new novel on-site to read through, and I'm kind of a fantasy nerd. So I came across ...

Omg I love the humor in the narration. It's just so wonderful. It's spot-on Julia and amuses me so much. It makes it so much fun to simply read . ...

HIIIII! I heard you're entering a contest, and you sounded a little overwhelmed, so I thought why not help out with reviewing your project?! This chapter was such a nice ...

Ohhhhhhh I love how this dives more into Debbie's relationship with her mother. It makes so much more sense of some of the behaviors and dialogue earlier in the first ...

Hello!! Such a cute image to choose. It's rather appropriate considering the message of your piece. It's clever since the kitten is looking up to the puppy. :D I like ...

AHHH DEBBIE NO. TRUST YOURSELF. ;.; I love how clear it is that Debbie's situation is very different from Helen's. Helen very clearly had gone through a whole different stage ...

Ohhhhh gosh, I hope I have time to read part two today. That might come later. I don't think I've met Debbie yet, so this is exciting! I also get ...