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  • Short Story » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: August in the Desert (1)

    HELLO!! Omg this is yet another unique perspective, and I love that you're careful to explore all these different backgrounds that are possible in this type of scenario. This is ...

    Jul 11, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 9

    WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT Their mother KILLED the triplet!??!??! She flat out hates Carter and her husband. This makes it sound like Carter's married. XD HOW IS MOTHER NOT IN

    Jul 11, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Hero's Brother (1.2)

    I'm back!! Carter wasn't actually that small and he was definitely not frail, but Bazzoli still loomed over him with enough mass that he might be able to lift a ...

    Jul 10, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 8

    YAY. I've been anxious to see how this phonecall goes! OMG that got dramatic in an oh-so-juicy way. Her mother sounds so annoyingly proper . XD Like so much so ...

    Jul 10, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Hero's Brother (1.1)

    HELLO! So I'm a little later than the weekend, but I'm here and I have NO REGRETS. The first big thing that I want to say is how AWESOME your ...

    Jul 9, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Eighteen

    HELLO!! Awwwwwwwwwwwww yeah, Zoltar!! SCARE 'EM OFF. That fight scene did not last as long as I thought it would. I feel like they stared at each other more than ...

    Jul 9, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Seventeen

    GOOD MORNING!! Yaaaaaaaaaaas let's get us some dinner, leggo. Omg Zoltar, you probably can't see them 'cause they're not paying attention. THEY'RE PROBABLY TALKING IN A BUSH SOMEWHERE. I don't ...

    Jul 8, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Fever

    Hello! You have a fun piece here that made me giggle despite its depressing subject matter. It started off pretty strongly, I thought, and the way it ended indicating malaria ...

    Jul 7, 2019
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: Earth to the Moon (3)

    OMG CLAIRE'S EVENTUAL DEFECTION ?? omgogoasdl;aksjdfl;asdf I WANT TO READ MOOORE. Okay, I'm good. I'm fine. Okay, so I REALLY REALLY love that this story, as a standalone, refers back ...

    Jul 6, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Sixteen

    GOOD MORNING! Hahahahaa I can already picture Shiraku scaring away the wildlife. He'll probably have a catch right in front of them and then Shiraku comes barreling in and scares ...

    Jul 6, 2019
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: Earth to the Moon (2)

    Yaaaay! I was waiting so anxiously for the next part. OMG THE EAGLE HAS LANDED. Hnnnnnnnnnnnng You know, it's just super exciting to actually witness the moon-landing after all the ...

    Jul 5, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 7

    I'M BACK. Sorry I'm a little later than usual, the holiday is keeping me busy this week. Also sorry for any typos. My tablet keyboard is just not as responsive ...

    Jul 5, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Fifteen

    Good morning! Omg this is getting dramatic Okay, so I love a lot of things about this exchange while he's sleeping. 1) I love that not only is he faking ...

    Jul 4, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Fourteen

    GOOD MORNING! Awwww yay!! We get a reference to Mouzan! I don't know if this is a result of some editing already, so maybe there's now some references in earlier ...

    Jul 3, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Thirteen

    HELLO! I'm almost caught up and I'm sad but excited and it's a WHIRLWIND OF EMOTIONS. Interesting how he's already calling the cave home. He literally only slept there one ...

    Jul 2, 2019


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