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Re: August in the Desert (1)
HELLO!! Omg this is yet another unique perspective, and I love that you're careful to explore all these different backgrounds that are possible in this type of scenario. This is ...
Jul 11, 2019 -
Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 9
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT Their mother KILLED the triplet!??!??! She flat out hates Carter and her husband. This makes it sound like Carter's married. XD HOW IS MOTHER NOT IN
Jul 11, 2019 -
Re: The Hero's Brother (1.2)
I'm back!! Carter wasn't actually that small and he was definitely not frail, but Bazzoli still loomed over him with enough mass that he might be able to lift a ...
Jul 10, 2019 -
Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 8
YAY. I've been anxious to see how this phonecall goes! OMG that got dramatic in an oh-so-juicy way. Her mother sounds so annoyingly proper . XD Like so much so ...
Jul 10, 2019 -
Re: The Hero's Brother (1.1)
HELLO! So I'm a little later than the weekend, but I'm here and I have NO REGRETS. The first big thing that I want to say is how AWESOME your ...
Jul 9, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Eighteen
HELLO!! Awwwwwwwwwwwww yeah, Zoltar!! SCARE 'EM OFF. That fight scene did not last as long as I thought it would. I feel like they stared at each other more than ...
Jul 9, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Seventeen
GOOD MORNING!! Yaaaaaaaaaaas let's get us some dinner, leggo. Omg Zoltar, you probably can't see them 'cause they're not paying attention. THEY'RE PROBABLY TALKING IN A BUSH SOMEWHERE. I don't ...
Jul 8, 2019 -
Re: Fever
Hello! You have a fun piece here that made me giggle despite its depressing subject matter. It started off pretty strongly, I thought, and the way it ended indicating malaria ...
Jul 7, 2019 -
Re: Earth to the Moon (3)
OMG CLAIRE'S EVENTUAL DEFECTION ?? omgogoasdl;aksjdfl;asdf I WANT TO READ MOOORE. Okay, I'm good. I'm fine. Okay, so I REALLY REALLY love that this story, as a standalone, refers back ...
Jul 6, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Sixteen
GOOD MORNING! Hahahahaa I can already picture Shiraku scaring away the wildlife. He'll probably have a catch right in front of them and then Shiraku comes barreling in and scares ...
Jul 6, 2019 -
Re: Earth to the Moon (2)
Yaaaay! I was waiting so anxiously for the next part. OMG THE EAGLE HAS LANDED. Hnnnnnnnnnnnng You know, it's just super exciting to actually witness the moon-landing after all the ...
Jul 5, 2019 -
Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 7
I'M BACK. Sorry I'm a little later than usual, the holiday is keeping me busy this week. Also sorry for any typos. My tablet keyboard is just not as responsive ...
Jul 5, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Fifteen
Good morning! Omg this is getting dramatic Okay, so I love a lot of things about this exchange while he's sleeping. 1) I love that not only is he faking ...
Jul 4, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Fourteen
GOOD MORNING! Awwww yay!! We get a reference to Mouzan! I don't know if this is a result of some editing already, so maybe there's now some references in earlier ...
Jul 3, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Thirteen
HELLO! I'm almost caught up and I'm sad but excited and it's a WHIRLWIND OF EMOTIONS. Interesting how he's already calling the cave home. He literally only slept there one ...
Jul 2, 2019
