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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 1.1)

    Okay, I love the banter between Cassius and Isadora. "You can't do something else either" literally killed me. I love it. *SQUEE* So these kids must have grown up a ...

    Oct 1, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Fireheart: 1

    AHHH HELLO! Assassins and royalty?! And I FEEL like there was some sort of magic involved with the lamppost. Like, I am entirely sold on this. I love how you ...

    Sep 30, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: A Blanket of Silence (extended)

    Hello! This is such a beautifully descriptive poem. I really like the picture of the rising and setting sun, and your vocabulary in expressing such an image really supports that ...

    Sep 29, 2019
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Assignment: Rebirth 1.1

    Hello, Tuck!! Another one of the all-famed LMS novels, and I have to say I really love this start. There's some really good stuff happening in this chapter, which might ...

    Sep 28, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 1.1

    Hello! I'm scouring the new LMSV entries, so I'm excited to have come by one of your novels finally! And might I add, I was not disappointed. The main thing ...

    Sep 27, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 14

    WHAT WHAT omg they're stepsisters. I think this is probably the best way for you to tie everything together, so it makes sense that you go this direction, BUT GOODNESS. ...

    Sep 26, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Prologue)

    HELLO! As soon as I read your post on this upcoming LMS adventure, I couldn't pass up on the chance to read it. And let me just say, it was ...

    Sep 25, 2019
  • Short Story » Culture, Other Re: Story 1: Starfish

    Hey, Tuckster! This was such a sweet story, and I really loved how it ended. The way the starfish story tied into the entire story itself -- it feels like ...

    Sep 24, 2019
  • Poetry » Health, Narrative Re: Lost

    This was such a beautiful piece! You really brought a lot of emotion and beauty through the eyes of a seashell, and that is just so awesome. The message behind ...

    Sep 23, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Not the Time-Poem (First Draft. Will post final in a separate post!)

    Hey, Fish! This is a really relatable issue, and I definitely can feel the emotion being expressed in the piece. Needless to say, the word choice is very easy to ...

    Sep 22, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Umbrellas in the Rain

    Hi, Joseph! I like what you did here with the umbrella metaphor. You really tied that in with your theme rather seamlessly, I thought. I particularly like how you started ...

    Sep 21, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Hero's Brother (42)

    LOL poor Isha. I love that she immediately detected that it was blood. Gosh, I love Isha. He also hadn’t gotten his hat back. I IMMEDIATELY STARTED SHOUTING OMG WHERE'S ...

    Sep 20, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Hero's Brother (41.2)

    YAS. I love that Gideon has NO hesitation and just threw that dagger at her on sight. Very Gideon of him, the Gideon we knew all along. It took me ...

    Sep 19, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Hero's Brother (41.1)

    Not gonna lie, I totally had the opening dialogue reversed (at least for Gideon since I thought it was Gideon and Carter talking). Like, I thought it was Carter trying ...

    Sep 18, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Hero's Brother (40.2)

    NO WORD COUNT D: //SOB oh man this is SO INTERESTING. Not many answers, so SO MANY THEORIES! First of all, I was COMPLETELY WRONG about Finn. Apparently, he was ...

    Sep 17, 2019


There is nothing to fear from someone who shouts.
— Chinua Achebe, Things Fall Apart