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  • Article / Essay » Politics, Culture Re: Colonization

    Hello! Welcome to YWS! :D This looks like it might've been a fun history project at school, though I could be mistaken. Nonetheless, I can tell you did a lot ...

    Oct 31, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 3.1)

    Okay, I love seeing this cameraderie between Mishal and Rowan. It's adorable and beautiful, and they clearly know each other pretty dang well. Rowan can see right through Mishal, who ...

    Oct 30, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 3.1

    OH MAH GERRRRD WE SCHEMIN' BOISSSS This was overall a good transition from the song to the next day's adventures. I'm super stoked to see Pires' plan in action. Plus, ...

    Oct 29, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Breath of a Breeze

    Hello! I like how this touches unique perspectives of how wonderful the world can be. Instead of drastic and chaotic events happening on the regular, the world is still fantastic ...

    Oct 28, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A song without words

    Hi, Annie! This is a nice piece of flash fiction. Very poetic and descriptive, and the narration did well in setting up the story itself. It really tugged at the ...

    Oct 27, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Script

    Hi, Daria! I love the theme you have here and the metaphor of storytelling that you use to express it. They really work super well and project that feeling of ...

    Oct 26, 2019
  • Script » Dramatic, Science Fiction Re: The War Machine-Intro

    Hey, Katnes! This is a fun concept for a TV show! It's kinda got that silly superhero/supervillain feel to it. You did well setting up the environments and making sure ...

    Oct 25, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Art class

    Hello! This was super cute and I absolutely enjoyed reading it. You have such a cute story told from a very sweet perspective. I really loved the repetition of it. ...

    Oct 24, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 2.2

    YAY IT'S SONG TIME!! It was a cooling device, some packs of ice strapped to a frame of pliable wood that could be wrapped loosely around a person’s body. It ...

    Oct 23, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 2.2)

    Omg. Before I get into the second segment, I have to say: Poor Mishal. Like, omg. All these kids interrogating him like the end of the world was nigh. I'm ...

    Oct 22, 2019
  • Other » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Glimpse: Part One

    Hello! I'm so happy to have stumbled over this. I enjoyed reading this so much, and I really hope you post more! (And if you do, totally let me know!!) ...

    Oct 21, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Ice & Magic - Chapter Two

    HI, SCAR!! I have been itching to read this for days now, and I'm finally here! And I have no regrets! It's like a guilty-pleasure fantasy read. Dragons and magic, ...

    Oct 20, 2019
  • Other » General, General Re: [DELETED]​

    AHHHHHHHHH YOU WRITE BABY JULIA SO ADORABLY OMG

    Oct 19, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: 01. The Invisible Kid

    Hello! I got your request to read your piece. I'm sorry I'm a few days late! I've had some other pieces I wanted to read, and I usually keep it ...

    Oct 18, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Assignment: Rebirth Chapter 2.1

    Oh, this is so exciting!! A cybernetic world of high-tech gadgets and secret agencies and royalty and war and politics and drama and omg! Omg it has everything AND I'M ...

    Oct 17, 2019


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