JabberHut

Good morning! So I have very little constructive anything to say because I really just enjoyed reading this a lot. It's so descriptive, thought-provoking, and incredibly relatable in so many ...

Good morning! The way you tie in the seasonal changes of the year into a relatable scenario is incredible. You're able to describe a season with serenity, and then proceed ...

Omg these two are just so adorabe. I have to say, I can picture Cassius just being the magical prankster, like some mischievous imp once he learns to control magic ...

oh no my poor baby ;______; Banishment seems so extreme for mentioning marriage, so there's undoubtedly more to it than that. I also wonder if Pires is perhaps serious or ...

OMG WHAT okay I had to tease myself and skim the next part to see what happened because WHAT I expected things to go badly but WHAT You once again ...

HELLO! I was so worried I wouldn't get to this today. I'm glad I did, though! This chapter really helped move things along and gave us some good insight into ...

Good morning! This was really pretty. The imagery was incredible here and really played with the senses. I loved the picture that I got out of it, how peaceful it ...

Hello! This is such a cool theme you're using in this piece. I love the examples you used earlier on to help put this into proper perspective and really drive ...

Good morning! I really like this piece and the theme behind it. There's so much emotion behind music, so diving into that idea offers a lot of opportunity for writers ...

Oh, this was too cute! I really love how this opens up and starts off at the shopping scene. The fact that this includes both Kath and the cashier lady ...

OH NO. XD OH NO, BUCK. oh no, buck, what are you going to do. WHAT ARE YOU GOING TO DO, BUCKET. The way this segment ended was so freaking ...

OMFG I LOVED THIS SO MUCH. First off, I find it hilarious how this ended with Cassius using a big word. After ALL THE COMPLAINING about Mishal and his BIG ...

Good morning! This is a really sweet piece that I just adored. It encompasses that innocent perspective of romantic love, how pure it can be simply by being close to ...

Good morning, mel0! This is SUCH a cute poem, and your narration of this story is really well done. It was easy to picture everything happening, and the pacing worked ...

Hello, Anamel! I REALLY love this. I love the story behind this and the progression of its narrative through the piece. It comes full circle at the end and ties ...