JabberHut

Hello, once again. :) heard the gate open behind me, but didn’t bother to look [s]behind me[/s]. Near the wall, far from the gate, there was a small shack that ...

Hello! :) I thought I'd stop by and be the first reviewer for you! :D Actually, the title of this caught my eye. I wanted to know what it meant ...

Hey! I got the review!! :D But after that , he got a bit more imaginative—though no less violent—while drawing a monkey with a sub-auto pistol blowing some windows out ...

and i know that parts of it are pretty rough with grammar and wording, so feel free to rip it apart *coughjabbercough*. What am I supposed to say to that?? ...

Hello again! Are you sick of me yet? :wink: When we finally [s]got to the[/s] reached town, it was a macabre sight. Bodies were burning, [semicolon] some were still bleeding, ...

Hello! :) The black demon had cut into his mother with his knife-like claws , and she’d fallen to the ground, crimson life spilling [s]unto[/s] onto the paved street. Cut ...

This critique has been sitting on my desk for a couple nights already. :shock: Best put it up before you hate me. :lol: I stood up and turned around [s]because ...

This is gonna be a real quick review, since I'm currently at school. ^^; “Because cursing is in [s]every-day [/s] everyday English. Prefieres Espańol?” "Impressive," I said with a smile. ...

Hey, Aedomir! Sorry, again, that I didn't get to this right away. However, here is my critique. :) Forgive me if I repeat anything Wozzles said before me. ^^ The ...

Alright, here I come! Lol, well, here comes the critique you've asked for. :) Perosk looked around the village from his seat on the roof of a building, but he ...

Alright, I took this to school (yes, I know: "Nerd!" ) and critiqued it. Forgive me if nothing makes sense, lol. The half dragon [s]got[/s] swung [or some other word?] ...

Hey, Gladius! I had to do this critique at school (yes, I printed it out and everything), so we'll see how well I copy it. By the way, could you ...

Alright, told you I'd get to this tonight. :wink: Take into account, however, that I am strangely very exhausted. I don't know what happened, but I suddenly went from fantastic ...

Sorry I didn't get to this sooner. :oops: I have homework to finish up still. :x Again, you can hold conversations through PM rather than this thread. :wink: It will ...

Alright, I'll try to find mistakes others haven't found, or make suggestions to changes they have mentioned. Some want because they believe they will see loved ones that have already ...