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Thanks LanaO!!!!:)

Thank you so much for all of this help. I will work on these things and post more of the story. I was so happy with all of this positive ...

Love the conversation and dialect. Really cool. It is humorous and has a good theme. I like how they get caught at the end. ;) Keep writing, but try to ...

Awesome! Love all of the descriptive words. Try to use more similes and metaphors and personification if it fits. Overall amazing!!!! :)

I love this it is so true

Amazing

hurried good ideas but PUT DETAIL i like the NOOOO thing but try to lessen it