Ivy19Elizabeth

Hi, So I am going to start this review by saying something nice. This is a very detailed piece, but it was kind of dragging on. I was often tempted ...

Hello, I don't want to sound harsh, but there are defidently some improvements you could make to this. First off, the poem itself is great. I think you have a ...

I really liked this chapter, and I really can't find any imperfections. But why did she start thinking of her father. There has to be something that sparks up that ...

Honestly, I don't think this was long enough. There are some grammar mistakes that you should fix, but I'm not going to repeat what you've already heard. Most of all ...

Wow, I thought this was amazing. I really liked the theme of this, and even though I've only read the first chapter I already have very high hopes for this ...

Wow, I have very mixed feelings about this piece. I thought it was really well written, but it mostly describes what she did in the morning rather than anything about ...

I like the prologue, but is it really necessary? I liked it a lot, but it sounded more like a description than a chapter. There are also some grammar mistakes. ...

I thought the idea itself was great. I really like the last paragraph. "There is no yellow in our hearts. Yellow is the color of sunshine Sunshine embodies happiness So ...

This poem flows together beautifully. The way you described love was a little darker than usual, but that's my faviorite part. I think the title describes the whole poem really ...

My first impression of this was sad. Even my last impression of it was sad. But it's still well written. I wonder what made her feel so worthless. Be in ...

This book has some really good writing in it. I would strongly recommend it for any looking for a good humour. The writer makes sure to use only words that ...

This is a great piece of poetry. I strongly recommend this to any one looking for a short but dramatic poem. I thought it was really sad and very well ...

This is a great poem. I think who wrote it must have been writing for years. It's short but very well written. That's exactly what makes a great impression. I ...