IvoryRose

I don’t think it’s bad. In my opinion, paint is a hard art medium. I better with pencils and ink. Blots are completely normal and happen to everybody. Yes,even DaVinci ...

It’s obvious this poem is not one to be taken seriously. However, that does not excuse the fact that grammar is extremely important! When, beginning a sentence you need to ...

Hi there,fellow tree lover!! I found this poem to be very deep and powerful. I love the way you would repeat,”There’s a tree on her back.” It helped make each ...

I enjoyed your story and I did not find any major mistakes. There were a few missing comas, but nothing really stuck out too much. You created a very emotional ...

Hi there fellow Watamote fan!! As pointed out by others you had some grammar mistakes and run on sentences. However, don't worry that happens to everyone. ;) Story wise I ...

Great poem. As mentioned by others before me you need to work on grammar, but don't worry I have that problem. I cannot spell even if my life depended on ...

Sorry if I seem like a stalker, but I keep on finding your work. It's interesting that you took on this topic and yes I agree with the rating. However, ...

Cool story. I could the rating a little unnecessary, since you cursed one time. In my opinion it would be 12 and up, but that's my opinion. I don't have ...

Damn this is the second time this has happened. I keep on submitting reviews before I finish them. >.< I'm an idiot if you haven't figured that out. I wish ...

Also my other comment was part of my review. …. >.< I didn't realize I clicked submit. I hope I'm not annoying or rambling. I just really like unique point ...

Wow. Usually when stories are from the perspective of an animal it is done in an over the top or silly way (at least the stuff I have read), however ...