IssacHunt

SPOILERS Wow, this is . . . really good. The symbolism, the characters, the characterization, the dialogue, the action, hell - the setting and . . . mythos (I guess ...

Well . . . this is a surprise. While there is a lot of talent here, this is certainly something that is of a higher level than the usual feed. ...

So, to summarize, an artist goes on one of those "anywhere the road takes me" trips and get lucky. He finds a place that suits his needs plus more - ...

The plot thickens, a nice follow up to the original, I can't drop an in depth review until more of the whole piece comes out. What you've given us so ...

Putting aside the things Deetea mentioned, this poem brings out really personal feeling, as if you're trying to show us a perspective from your view, or let us get a ...

Short but sharp. A nice tribute to a maestro of animation as well as all anyone who's an artist. Sincere, wonderfully planned, wonderfully put together, and finally, wonderfully executed. Intentionall

This is really grasping. This is the first and only chapter I've read for this, and I mean, if this is just one chapter, I can only imagine how good ...

A very sincere stoem (basically a word I made that means a story with heavy poetic elements or an atmosphere that is strongly poetic) that has a nice beginning a ...

Very good poem, this one has a really strong association factor, I think everyone's had a moment where they've felt like they need to "step up to the plate" and ...

Haha. This is like your story LB vs RB, personifying inanimate objects. I'm guessing it's a common theme for you. Overall, it's pretty funny, the only mistake I found was ...