Young Writers Society

It is very strange. Really the furniture stuffs, they all go like that? Oh my god. Then, now i'm sitting on a chair, i can't even think it is alive and the chair's going to slap me on face and gonna say, "Hey you idiot, sit straight." ---------- never mind. I'm a lame joker. When anybody ask me, " Oh kid, what you wanna be?" I'm like, "Clown?" Haha.

Enough that. Your writing i guess is pretty unique and I've read the other one Left-Right Brain, and i guess they are pretty same. Not similarity between concepts but only in formats. That's no problem at all, is it? I guess as @IssacHunt figured out, you should check your very first line again.

That's it for now. Have a great day. Here take a candy Enjoy.

Haha. This is like your story LB vs RB, personifying inanimate objects. I'm guessing it's a common theme for you. Overall, it's pretty funny, the only mistake I found was in the first line, you repeated the word "out", while I think you could've added some more dialogue with the furniture bringing some more points to their argument, overall, I think this was pretty on point.