IntelligentlyStupid

I really enjoy this. It's in fact pretty darn neat! I've often thought about what happens to "lost time". The only thing i've ever been able to come up with, ...

Before I star here, I have to say this: I REALLY like what you did with those slashes. I find that they really seem to add something. I don't know ...

I find that on quite a personal level I can definitely connect with this. It reminds me a lot of my own poetry in fact. A few things I like: ...

This poem was masterfully done, and the only problem i can see is YWS once more destroying formatting. This poem IS truly a romantic thing. It explains how someone feels ...

All in all this poem seems rather good, however there are a few things I would like to point out. Your rhyming seems a little forced, but it's okay, better ...

My Gods! i love it! i really do! this is absolutely hilarious, one hundred percent hilarity is oozing out of my right now. When reading this, i get the image ...

This has an extreme emotional effect for me, because i spent 3 months of my life trying to get someone i loved to stop doing this. I failed in the ...

Hullo, I.S here for some reviewin today :) First off, i think this is EXTREMELY well done. the main character, i'll refer to them as the narrator, has super powers. ...

alrighty, t'is time for a review :D First off, i love this poem, and can really relate to it. To me, it seems to be that the speaker either is, ...

this is actually perfect. I have no idea what to say, except that i love it. I really do! This seems actually rather powerful, and seems to describe to me ...

Hullo Converse, I.S here for a review today. Wow, this is truly one heck of a short. its got everything a short needs, and a few things to make it ...

I read this, and a bit of a cold sweat breaks out when i do. I cannot but read this, without imagining some poor girl laying there, hurt. perhaps not ...

Poems like these always remind me of the ten word short story challenge, which always seems like so much, packed into so little, allowing you to imagine the context, the ...

This poem is actually making me feel. i miss so many family members that i had friends with, and i was really able to connect with this. I know that ...

All in all, i think this is pretty good mate, but there is a spelling discrepency that i caught. ... with them god dam cheap matches from Tesco... In that ...