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Re: Silent
So you are the last person i'm reviewing tonight Getting kind of sleepy here But your poem was good It kept me in suspense the whole time My short story ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Life
I liked your poem You got straight to the point I didn't catch any grammatical errors Your format was great Although this poem is great, it is a bit short. ...
Feb 20, 2014 -
Re: Love
Okay I won't be long. Maybe you could go and reword a couple of sentences. The poem was really good overall. Hey I think I love you Maybe I do ...
Feb 18, 2014 -
Re: Life
The poem was awesome. I think a lot of people can really relate to this piece of literature. It was short, but well written. Keep up the good work!
Feb 18, 2014 -
Re: Life
The poem was awesome. I think a lot of people can really relate to this piece of literature. It was short, but well written. Keep up the good work!
Feb 18, 2014 - Re: Paper Feb 17, 2014
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Re: Paper
This was really good considering that this was really short. I would suggest maybe adding in more detail. When you're writing its not good to keep repeating the same word. ...
Feb 17, 2014 -
Re: Three Words
I really enjoyed your poem. It kept me engaged the whole time. Everyone does not know how to write poetry, and you did a great job. As a writer you ...
Feb 17, 2014 -
Re: Save Me
There are some typos but that gets the best of us. Fix those and this poem can go somewhere. I really enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Feb 17, 2014 -
Re: you
This is a really good poem.
Jan 21, 2014
