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This is great! I really enjoyed this piece- you paint Alice in a very original light. Just watch out for spelling mistaakes such as "neverknow" at the end, there. "Alice ...

This is a great piece! I especially loved the lines: "She played the beginning of the end." and "A strand of wispy hair falling from her hat." You painted a ...

I love the idea behind this piece, it's very original and interesting. The dialogue is snappy and great, and the pace of the piece is very enjoyable. Overall, it was ...

I thought this was a lovely poem. I especially liked your running theme of seasons, which really kept the poem together. The last sentence is particularly nice, as it gives ...

A great piece of writing. I for one do not feel the Einstein quote is misplaced- it meant something to me, but perhaps this is a personal preferance. Your opening ...

This is a brilliant poem. Absolutely loved it. I think it would be amazing as a slam poem- one to be read aloud. Th rhyming pattern and structure of it ...

This is a GREAT poem! I really enjoyed it, have liked and followed :) Your vocabulary is excellent, and you write in such an original way that I was captivated ...

This was great! I really enjoyed reading it. You got yourself a like :) If I had to change one thing about it I would perhaps not use quite so ...

This is brilliant! Starting with speech really got my attention, as I didn't know who was talking. It's a bit like opening a book in the middle. I wanted to ...

I really loved this. You crafted a really deep, free verse piece here. Your use of words like "sultry" and "lamber" created a really strong image in my mind as ...

Hi, here to review :) Wow! I really enjoyed this poem. I feel that it got better and better as you went along. "In a room with white walls" that ...