Inked

Let me take a guess as to what you meant. You always say "I know" when your parents yell at you, and it angers them more. "If you KNOW why ...

Praises!!! I loved it. I felt whey word. You had me with the names. They were very pretty. you must remember this is a script, so it is all about ...

I'm not sure if there is supposed to be a definite rhyme scheme here. Honestly this is a well put together poem. It evokes emotions and feelings. I can almost ...

Okay, I'm going to start off by saying, oww. I have a friend like that. on to the review! So it seems more like a list rather than a story. ...

I see that it has been adressed the first person third person No-No. Okay I don't know if you are new at poetry, but it's nice to stick to one ...

Inked here! In the beginning, "Unbroken free..." I believe that was a mistake being that it made no sense. I. Was a great image. You made me angry. Angry at ...

Inked here! This was interesting. so what I found was that it was a little difficult to get through, but then again I'm not big on the space theme. you ...

Inked here! Okay to start off you had a little typo at the end. I think you meant to put "And once he catches me." It was good, you might ...

Inked here! So I like your take on happy endings. You did a great job of getting your point across. Since this is a review I must give you a ...

Inked here! I liked this a lot. I think you need to learn how to show rather than tell. Instead of telling me she ran, paint a picture of her ...

Inked here. okay so even for a short film this is too short. You need context and a good scene. And when writing script you need to make up for ...

Inked here! I get it, it spoke to me. I do agree that it was a bit cliche, but that isn't a bad thing. Cliches are cliche because they work. ...

Inked here! This sounds a lot like lyrics to a song. I mean it's nice and all, but. It isn't exactly deep. I suggest trying to make the poem longer, ...

hey, Inked here! Kay so I like the way you described the girl, as a creature of beauty. Sometimes she seemed more object like than a person. I think you ...

hello, Inked here, so your poem "I can't even" Is brilliant in its simplicity. I honestly don't think it needs anything more. not at all what I expected, but then ...