Hello CapitalMonday here. I would like to begin about how you repeat the words of this poem to create a tone within the poem and how you use imagery into this poem. The tone of this poem is that you want to escape the monster within yourself but you can't since the monster inside yourself is pulling you around on an invisible thread. You scratch and fight and punch but at the end, you fail and the monster is still within your body. So you lay there unsure about what to do and you lay there, the monsters in your chest and in your mind are winning.
The imagery in this poem is like a blank canvas. Since the reader can imagine limitless possibilities to what might you be doing. How you were feeling or how you were looking? these can be the possible question the readers might ask or maybe they don't want to a answer questions and would rather read it.
Anyway, I think i could relate to this poem since mostly every night, I try to sleep but there are fights in my head telling me a story or telling me not to go to sleep before a school night. This poem is a well-written poem and I wish i could write like you.
Farewell,
CapitalMonday
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