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InkWell38

InkWell38

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: Moon Over a Sleeping Forest

    Wow, what a beautiful poem. I can't even get over how much I love the last lines, "And fuels the hunger / Of the hunters / Who have so patiently ...

    Oct 15, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: public delights

    Hi yumkit! Just like your last compilation of poems this hit me in the feels over and over and over. I just enjoy so much the story you tell in ...

    Oct 15, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: here I am

    I have to start off this review by saying how much i adore the line "we are drowning in this cacophonous / noise of waterfall, but what happened / to ...

    Oct 10, 2020
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: Breathe

    Hi! Here for a review of your poem. I loved it and wow was this heart wrenching. You described this moment so perfectly I felt like I was actually going ...

    Oct 10, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: The Geode

    Hello :) This poem gave me a soft feeling if that makes any sense and the twist at the end hit me in the gut (a good thing, it was ...

    Oct 8, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hallucinations

    Sometimes the heaviest emotions are best when executed simply and that is exactly what you did here, and well. I personally know the feelings you described in this poem and ...

    Oct 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Lullaby

    This is terrifying in every way possible which means you totally nailed it. Some of my favorite lines are: "Do not fear, heed my call / join in my basket ...

    Oct 6, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: photosynthesis

    What a unique poem! It's very pleasant to read and I think everyone can relate to feeling different somehow, not wanting to bend or adhere to what other people are ...

    Oct 6, 2020
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: stars of cheese that fall like snowflakes

    This has such a whimsical tone to it I love it! Really reminds me of being a kid it's very imaginative (especially the way you formatted it). Never once did ...

    Oct 6, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: harvest of light

    Firstly I am in love with the illustration that goes along with this beautiful poem. Secondly, so much is said in a concise manner which is very impressive. There's really ...

    Oct 5, 2020
  • Poetry » Supernatural, General Re: a love letter to october

    Considering I love this time of year...this was awesome!!! you perfectly captured the season imo. "holding my plastic pumpkin / in two steady hands, / i step out into / ...

    Oct 5, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Salvation Blue

    From start to finish I loved this poem. Something about the lines "Your kitchen is millennial pink, / and you burn your fingers crimson / when you touch the whistling ...

    Oct 5, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: private apocalypse

    I love the visuals you give with these..."paint my fingers with fresh pomegranate / they stain the same, so let my head stay in your lap" "you cup my face ...

    Oct 5, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Choking

    I absolutely love this poem! I really enjoyed that you used beautiful imagery (flowers, petals) while relating it to the choking words. At the end you equate this garden as ...

    Oct 5, 2020


No spring nor summer beauty hath such grace as I have seen in one autumnal face.
— John Donne