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Re: Moon Over a Sleeping Forest
Wow, what a beautiful poem. I can't even get over how much I love the last lines, "And fuels the hunger / Of the hunters / Who have so patiently ...
Oct 15, 2020 -
Re: public delights
Hi yumkit! Just like your last compilation of poems this hit me in the feels over and over and over. I just enjoy so much the story you tell in ...
Oct 15, 2020 -
Re: here I am
I have to start off this review by saying how much i adore the line "we are drowning in this cacophonous / noise of waterfall, but what happened / to ...
Oct 10, 2020 -
Re: Breathe
Hi! Here for a review of your poem. I loved it and wow was this heart wrenching. You described this moment so perfectly I felt like I was actually going ...
Oct 10, 2020 -
Re: The Geode
Hello :) This poem gave me a soft feeling if that makes any sense and the twist at the end hit me in the gut (a good thing, it was ...
Oct 8, 2020 -
Re: Hallucinations
Sometimes the heaviest emotions are best when executed simply and that is exactly what you did here, and well. I personally know the feelings you described in this poem and ...
Oct 7, 2020 -
Re: Lullaby
This is terrifying in every way possible which means you totally nailed it. Some of my favorite lines are: "Do not fear, heed my call / join in my basket ...
Oct 6, 2020 -
Re: photosynthesis
What a unique poem! It's very pleasant to read and I think everyone can relate to feeling different somehow, not wanting to bend or adhere to what other people are ...
Oct 6, 2020 -
Re: stars of cheese that fall like snowflakes
This has such a whimsical tone to it I love it! Really reminds me of being a kid it's very imaginative (especially the way you formatted it). Never once did ...
Oct 6, 2020 -
Re: harvest of light
Firstly I am in love with the illustration that goes along with this beautiful poem. Secondly, so much is said in a concise manner which is very impressive. There's really ...
Oct 5, 2020 -
Re: a love letter to october
Considering I love this time of year...this was awesome!!! you perfectly captured the season imo. "holding my plastic pumpkin / in two steady hands, / i step out into / ...
Oct 5, 2020 -
Re: Salvation Blue
From start to finish I loved this poem. Something about the lines "Your kitchen is millennial pink, / and you burn your fingers crimson / when you touch the whistling ...
Oct 5, 2020 -
Re: private apocalypse
I love the visuals you give with these..."paint my fingers with fresh pomegranate / they stain the same, so let my head stay in your lap" "you cup my face ...
Oct 5, 2020 -
Re: Choking
I absolutely love this poem! I really enjoyed that you used beautiful imagery (flowers, petals) while relating it to the choking words. At the end you equate this garden as ...
Oct 5, 2020
