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Re: Prologue: Of Love and Friendship
Hi Maryanne! First of all, welcome to YWS! If you have any questions about the site, you can head on over to There, people are waiting to help out new ...
Sep 4, 2013 -
Re: The L Word: 01
Hi Darkheart! I like this story, so far. It's a really cutesy romance kinda thing. I'm a huge sucker for romance stories. So, I'm sure I'll like this one. Now, ...
Sep 4, 2013 -
Re: LAPIS :Chapter 4:
So, I'm not even sure if you want me to do this all the time. I can still review... But I don't have to point out the grammar errors if ...
Sep 1, 2013 -
Re: Subway
Hi violinlover73! Before I get to the review, welcome to YWS! There are a bunch of amazing, friendly here to help you on your journey of writing. If that makes ...
Sep 1, 2013 -
Re: LAPIS :Chapter 3:
Hey... Again! Back for the third (fourth if you count the dictionary) review! I have a good amount of things I want to review, so I'm gonna get right to ...
Sep 1, 2013 -
Re: Bleached
Hey ShonenChicoBoy! I loved reading this! I have watched and read Bleach anime and manga. Not all of it, but a good bit. Anyway, I really liked reading it in ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: You think you want to be a writer? No you don't.
I'm not going to critique this. Plain and simple. That's because it's already way to perfect. Thank you for posting this! This really got to me and I was a ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: Element - Prologue
Hi racket! Okay, so I'm going to review this as I read it. When I first take a glance at your work, the first thing I notice is that there ...
Aug 29, 2013 -
Re: LAPIS :Chapter 2:
Hey again. :) I'm back to review your awesome story! By the way, I'm sorry this is kind of late. I know you already posted a couple more chapters. I've ...
Aug 28, 2013 -
Re: Life goes on part 1
Hi Speakout! First of all, welcome to YWS! There are tons of amazing people here to help you on your journey of writing. Haha, that sounds kinda weird. Anyway, feel ...
Aug 28, 2013 -
Re: Go Back to Bed
Nice poem, Captain! Haha. :) I can relate to this poem. I feel this way often, especially before the first day of school. The feeling of nervousness was portrayed well ...
Aug 26, 2013 -
Re: The Color of Pain
Hey fortis! I really like this. Plain and simple. I read it multiple times and each time, I obtained a new feeling from it. That was super cool. The first ...
Aug 26, 2013 -
Re: A dive into the abyss
Hey Leo! I hope it's okay to call you that. Anyway, I liked this - a lot. I absolutely loved the words you picked out and the feelings portrayed in ...
Aug 26, 2013 -
Re: Not Everything Is Within the Mind
Hi ForeverRebel! Nice username :p Aww. This made me smile. It's so short, sweet, and simple. Even though there are so few words, this poem made a nice statement. I ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: The Pianist
Hey cgirl! Good job! I'm sure you already know you are a little off on the syllables, but that's okay. You're close enough, right? I wanted to learn how to ...
Aug 25, 2013
