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Thank you so much!

Thank you for the review! :)

Thank you so much for your kind words

Thank you so much for the review and for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Thank you for the review! And yes, this was meant to portray someone with paranoid schizophrenia.

No problem! If you have any more questions about any of this, or just grammar rules in general, feel free to PM me and I will be glad to help ...

This review is brought to you by InfiniteRectangles Hello, I'm here to review your revised version of your story. First, I will say that it is a significant improvement from ...

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Thank you for your review! I will work on making my transitions smoother. Also, I am aware that vinyls seem to be making a bit of a comeback, but where ...

It's perfectly fine to start describing Zeight, just space it out a little. Don't give the readers every little detail at once. I've read and reviewed your other chapter now. ...

Thank you so much! :)

Thanks for the review! I added periods instead of commas after those places you mentioned because I was trying to match the rhythm of the tapping, but it might have ...

Thank you so much for the review! And I understand how you feel about the beeping. My ears tend to ring quite loudly at night, and the quieter my environment, ...

Ah, alright. Thanks for clearing that up for me! :)

Also, I see that you're new here. Welcome to YWS! :D