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Re: Please Don't Assume
Hi there! First off, I'd like to mention that if you had paid a wee bit of attention to the capitalization, that would have helped a lot in the presentation ...
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Re: Riddle
Let me take a guess.... Volcano? It can't be cigarette since it only takes life, does not give... Okay...if my guess is right or close, your poetic parameters are amazing, ...
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Re: Breathing.
Hi there! Well, I read your poem twice to completely digest the matter in it. It kept glued for the entire time. Let me start with some things... 1) you ...
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Re: No Parking
This poem truly brings to light the truth of our lives, right from our birth, we are told not to cry, not to play with fire, not this, not that!!! ...
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Re: I Am Afraid To Sleep
A classic romantic poem!!! Man...I would have to tire myself out day and night to write such a poem, and you write these poems since you cannot sleep! :) I ...
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Re: Pupz
First of all, I am really sorry about your father. Now, your poetry is just too heart - warming. I seriously had tears in my eyes when I finished reading ...
Nov 9, 2014 -
Re: I want to _____
After reading this poem, I had one question in my mind which I am going to ask you now. How much time did it take you to write such a ...
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Re: I am a Giraffe
Brother, you touched my heart just by that name, let me tell you that, first of all. The thing is that I was pretty tall, taller than the other guys ...
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Re: At Temple's Fall
Amazing! I must say your poem is indeed unique. It gives a feeling of reality. It presents the reality of life that all things that come must one day go. ...
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Re: Prologue
Your story really captured my heart and mind and just as I had started reading, I felt drawn to this story. It just captures my imagination and your second last ...
Nov 9, 2014
