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Twilight isn't as good as it was when I first read it ... two years ago. But I learned to dislike it as I read on and on. That series ...

I am going to review your piece. Just to let you know bold is my personal comments and red is my adjustments. When the lights started to go on sooner ...

Well let's see, I recommend The Other Boleyn Girl whose author escapes me at the moment. If you have read that one, I recommed Sundays at Tiffany's and Sam's Letters ...

Just a heads up. bold is my own personal comments and red is my corrections September 8th 2006 was the first time I walked down the hallways as a senior. ...

I am going to critique the story first then give you more of my feed back of the actual characters and story idea. My comments will be in bold and ...

Okay, my comments will be in bold and my adjustments will be in red . The air was cold and muggy. Every time she took a breath it felt stiff ...

Okay... This is really random... But I just have to say that when I read this part, I chuckled. My golden, little Yellowhammer, Singing gracefully from the hedge, Don’t let ...

Well I'm going to tell you somethings that popped into my head as I read this, and I am horrible at poetry so I actually have no idea if I ...

kissthewitch covered pretty much all of what I have to say. But I also really do like this poem and I think it is heartfelt. Some of the parts don't ...

Well, Peanut covered a lot but I have a couple of things so say. You did have punctuation errors and some capitalization problems with your I s. The sentences were ...

I second the recommendation for The Other Boleyn Girl by Philippa Gregory. That is a great story even though it is fairly sad. It has mature themes though but it ...

Wow. I was actually surprised with that. That was well written except for some minor errors. There are some grammar and spelling errors that I noticed and also at some ...

I 100% agree that Ann Rice's Vampire Chronicles are better then the twilight series. Even though the series was written for a different group of people the writing and characters ...

I have already read Inkdeath and I bought it on October 7th so it has been out for a while. With that series I would have to say that the ...

Well, aloe already stole most of the tings I was going to say but otherwise it was a good story to read. It has peaked my attention and I will ...